This is a short scene from a book im writing titled "that neck hole girl" tell me what you think.
We were laying under the oak tree, watching the sunset, except the sunset hadn't started yet, ill tell you when it starts. There was a quiet whisper in the wind when she said "what do you like most about me". I replied "your back hole"..it was silent for a long time until she said "that was probably the one answer, the one answer that could work" We started making out furiously. Her fingers slid down my torso and forced their way into my hip lip. "Huuurrghh Ahhhh", i said, it hurt but it also felt good, then the sunset started. I positioned my long nose above her neck hole and licked the fingers that came out of it. The daisys were yelling at me to stop with the foreplay, my nose entered the neck hole, even though my nose hair felt so good rubbing inside her neck, I couldnt help but look at the beautiful sunset out of the corner of my eye. She pulled me back to reality with a loud yell "Its coming out of my back hole!". We had startled the slugs that live in her back hole, and they were coming.
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