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I wrote a pretty bad pasta and it somehow got accepted onto the website.

It will be on the website on 12/19.

Anyway, has anyone of the Flood written a Creepypasta before that got accepted onto the website? If so I would like to read it. Thanks

BTW, if you want to read my crappypasta right now it's here

[Edited on 12.16.2012 2:44 PM PST]

  • 12.15.2012 6:17 PM PDT

I like to play Reach for fun. I hate MLG, campers, armor lock, and team killers because they ruin that fun. Deal with it.

I didn't. But my favorite is Slenderman.

  • 12.15.2012 6:18 PM PDT

Then who was phone?

  • 12.15.2012 6:18 PM PDT

Welcome.
You have just entered my mind. Please sign the contract before continuing further into this black hole to acknowledge I am not at fault if any mental/physical damage is caused to you whilst viewing my history. If any damage to yourself is caused, please call your whaambulance for advice.

Why not post it here? I'm sure it's better than you think!

  • 12.15.2012 6:18 PM PDT
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"Hoc volo sic iubeo. Sit pro rationes voluntas." - Juvenal

"Scio me nihil scire." - Socrates

Go post it in The Gallery so we can all read it.

  • 12.15.2012 6:18 PM PDT

Welcome.
You have just entered my mind. Please sign the contract before continuing further into this black hole to acknowledge I am not at fault if any mental/physical damage is caused to you whilst viewing my history. If any damage to yourself is caused, please call your whaambulance for advice.


Posted by: Spirit of Ember
Then who was phone?

*gasp!*

You could alternatively post it in the 'Short, Scary Stories!'

[Edited on 12.15.2012 6:21 PM PST]

  • 12.15.2012 6:19 PM PDT

-The Nasty Officah-


Posted by: Deadlights911
I wrote a pretty bad pasta and it somehow got accepted onto the website.

It will be on the website on 12/19.

Anyway, has anyone of the Flood written a Creepypasta before that got accepted onto the website? If so I would like to read it. Thanks

BTW, if you want to my crappypasta right now I can e-mail it to you.



Posted by: Deadlights911
crappypasta


I see what you did there, OP.

  • 12.15.2012 6:20 PM PDT
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Posted by: Ankrow
Go post it in The Gallery so we can all read it.


Maybe, it seriously is pretty bad.

I'm not trying to say this so I can get attention. I wrote it in my freshman year for a Halloween story and decided to submit it to Creepypasta.

  • 12.15.2012 6:21 PM PDT

Rarity FTW

I usually enjoy reading it, but I'm not very good at writing it.

  • 12.15.2012 6:23 PM PDT

"Banhammer" - Post anything in the Waypoint forums -50g

If you don't want to post it here can you PM it to me? I'm interested.

  • 12.15.2012 6:25 PM PDT
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Well, if you really want to read it I posted it on the Gallery

http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=76344053

  • 12.15.2012 6:33 PM PDT
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See, wasn't it pretty bad?

  • 12.15.2012 6:44 PM PDT

Check me out:
http://www.youtube.com/user/PhormalityMusic?feature=mhee

I'll be honest (Just read it), I love the concept of the Magic 8 Ball and all that, and the writing was solid from my point of view, but the showing the creature and describing it's appearance sort of ruined the suspense, I would have preferred it to be an enigmatic force, or maybe something that can predict the future and thus drives him to his doom in an effort to avert fate, or something (Sort of Oedipus style).

But, good showing, I like it so far!

  • 12.15.2012 7:01 PM PDT


Posted by: Deadlights911

Posted by: Ankrow
Go post it in The Gallery so we can all read it.


Maybe, it seriously is pretty bad.

I'm not trying to say this so I can get attention. I wrote it in my freshman year for a Halloween story and decided to submit it to Creepypasta.
Do it for teh lulz.

  • 12.15.2012 7:14 PM PDT
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Posted by: Heven644
I'll be honest (Just read it), I love the concept of the Magic 8 Ball and all that, and the writing was solid from my point of view, but the showing the creature and describing it's appearance sort of ruined the suspense, I would have preferred it to be an enigmatic force, or maybe something that can predict the future and thus drives him to his doom in an effort to avert fate, or something (Sort of Oedipus style).

But, good showing, I like it so far!


Hey thanks for the critique. Now that I've read it again I do agree with you about making the creature ominous

  • 12.15.2012 7:16 PM PDT
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NOTE TO THE PEOPLE WHO READ IT:

If you could leave a comment that would be great

  • 12.15.2012 7:21 PM PDT

Bones of my enemies.


Posted by: Spirit of Ember
Then who was phone?

But who was toast?

  • 12.15.2012 7:27 PM PDT
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To the people who read it, please leave a comment. Thanks

  • 12.16.2012 2:43 PM PDT

“Dear humanity, we regret being alien bastards. We regret coming to Earth. And we most definitely regret that the corps just blew up our raggedy ass fleet!” -Sgt. Johnson

You said the 8 ball responded in one word, "Of course." That's two words.

  • 12.16.2012 2:57 PM PDT

"When I joined the Corps, we didn't have any fancy-schmanzy tanks. We had sticks! Two sticks, and a rock for the whole platoon—and we had to share the rock!"

-Sgt. Johnson

That was an awesome story OP. Better than what I could write.

  • 12.16.2012 3:14 PM PDT