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Posted by: CrazzySnipe55
+1 for Alternative Kazoo Scat Rock.
For real though, some of the lyrics seem forced. It's something I see a lot of aspiring artists (namely the many -blam!- rappers at my school) do. They can't think of a rhyme or something so they overload a line with syllables and say it really fast so they don't get off-pace with the song. A little bit of refinement there would be fine. I really do love the kazoo bit, though.
Haha, thanks for the critique
[Edited on 12.19.2012 6:53 PM PST]