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Poll: Do you like it?  [closed]
It's awesome:  16%
(3 Votes)
It's pretty good:  26%
(5 Votes)
It's alright:  26%
(5 Votes)
It's not that good:  5%
(1 Votes)
It's abosuletly terrible:  26%
(5 Votes)
Total Votes: 19

Does anybody like the song?

If you could leave a critique that would be great. Thanks

[Edited on 12.19.2012 6:49 PM PST]

  • 12.19.2012 6:21 PM PDT
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I click but nothing happens. :(

  • 12.19.2012 6:22 PM PDT

''Hell is other people.''

I kep clickin' on teh link but nuhtin' happens!!5!

  • 12.19.2012 6:22 PM PDT

in·dif·fer·ence
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Posted by: Murcielago00
I click but nothing happens. :(

  • 12.19.2012 6:22 PM PDT
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Can't link HTTPS, OP.

[Edited on 12.19.2012 6:23 PM PST]

  • 12.19.2012 6:22 PM PDT


Posted by: Deadlights911
[url=https://soundcloud.com/slick-12/goose]new song I wrote with my band. Does anybody like it?[/url]

Just let me quote this fail first then I will tell you how it was.

  • 12.19.2012 6:22 PM PDT

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Posted by: RedXRulez
I kep clickin' on teh link but nuhtin' happens!!5!

  • 12.19.2012 6:23 PM PDT
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Posted by: Deadlights911
lol fix'd

  • 12.19.2012 6:24 PM PDT
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Posted by: BACE

Posted by: Deadlights911
lol fix'd


K thanks

  • 12.19.2012 6:26 PM PDT

Did I just hear "skiddly diddly dee"?

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It feels a little loose rhythmically. Like there are very slight delays/moments of lateness in your bass/guitar. I like the bass groove though. The extra sound effects may or may not be necessary; could just be a matter of opinion, I guess. The vocals are decent, but not great.

Reminds me of Jet for some reason.

  • 12.19.2012 6:27 PM PDT

Cammalamm is the best.

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Learn to link.

  • 12.19.2012 6:28 PM PDT
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Posted by: iR MomentuM
It feels a little loose rhythmically. Like there are very slight delays/moments of lateness in your bass/guitar. I like the bass groove though. The extra sound effects may or may not be necessary; could just be a matter of opinion, I guess. The vocals are decent, but not great.

Reminds me of Jet for some reason.


Alright thanks for the critique. Yeah, I do admit it's little bit loose on rhythm

  • 12.19.2012 6:28 PM PDT
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Posted by: zoobkillerninja
Learn to link.


I do. I just don't know why I wasn't able to link this link

  • 12.19.2012 6:28 PM PDT
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Posted by: zoobkillerninja
Learn to link.


There, fix'd

  • 12.19.2012 6:31 PM PDT
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Dude that was awesome. I listend to your other stuff and they're all really good. lamp that was mine was my fav

  • 12.19.2012 6:36 PM PDT
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Posted by: Help me please
Dude that was awesome. I listend to your other stuff and they're all really good. lamp that was mine was my fav


Thanks!

  • 12.19.2012 6:39 PM PDT

What a waste....

Pretty good. Vocals could use some work, though.

  • 12.19.2012 6:41 PM PDT

Key

+1 for Alternative Kazoo Scat Rock.

For real though, some of the lyrics seem forced. It's something I see a lot of aspiring artists (namely the many -blam!- rappers at my school) do. They can't think of a rhyme or something so they overload a line with syllables and say it really fast so they don't get off-pace with the song. A little bit of refinement there would be fine. I really do love the kazoo bit, though.

[Edited on 12.19.2012 6:44 PM PST]

  • 12.19.2012 6:43 PM PDT

It's Ok. The effects don't relay feel needed and the vocals need some work. Though you did pretty good instrumentally.

  • 12.19.2012 6:43 PM PDT

Key

Make a really badass indie-looking music video, work on the lyrics and pacing, re-record once more and you could get a cult following easily.

  • 12.19.2012 6:47 PM PDT
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Posted by: CrazzySnipe55
+1 for Alternative Kazoo Scat Rock.

For real though, some of the lyrics seem forced. It's something I see a lot of aspiring artists (namely the many -blam!- rappers at my school) do. They can't think of a rhyme or something so they overload a line with syllables and say it really fast so they don't get off-pace with the song. A little bit of refinement there would be fine. I really do love the kazoo bit, though.


Haha, thanks for the critique

[Edited on 12.19.2012 6:53 PM PST]

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Posted by: xyz4524
It's Ok. The effects don't relay feel needed and the vocals need some work. Though you did pretty good instrumentally.


Relay?

I think the effects really help with the aesthetics of the song.

  • 12.19.2012 7:00 PM PDT


Posted by: Deadlights911

Posted by: xyz4524
It's Ok. The effects don't relay feel needed and the vocals need some work. Though you did pretty good instrumentally.


Relay?

I think the effects really help with the aesthetics of the song.

It can, but It didn't feel that way for me. What editing software do you use? (garageband, Magix music maker, etc)

  • 12.19.2012 7:01 PM PDT
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Posted by: xyz4524

Posted by: Deadlights911

Posted by: xyz4524
It's Ok. The effects don't relay feel needed and the vocals need some work. Though you did pretty good instrumentally.


Relay?

I think the effects really help with the aesthetics of the song.

It can, but It didn't feel that way for me. What editing software do you use? (garageband, Magix music maker, etc)


It's Magix Music Maker

[Edited on 12.19.2012 7:04 PM PST]

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