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My second one :D

The pounding sounds of feet
On the walk of hate and death
Startles me from my slumber
The sliver moon lights up the road of red
I can't get it out of my mind
That so many were left to bleed on that road
A lonely nightingale sings a memorial to all those who have fallen
They hit me
They kicked me
They thought I would give in
But just I turned the other cheek and pushed on
For all those who broke under their torture
My heart is with you
Each word they speak meaningless
They want you to die
They want you to feel the pain the throw at you
Oh I get numb in my bones and in my heart
When I hear what they say
But it's better to move on than stay behind
To them judgment is easy
They pick a side and a comfortable lie to accuse you of
Please stay strong for me
Remember those who have fallen
Because they were driven into madness
And they ended the madness with darkness and death

  • 12.29.2012 2:50 PM PDT

Why did you click the more button? By accident? Reply is at the bottom...
They call me The Precursor

She said "you're movin with your auntie and uncle in bel-air".

  • 12.29.2012 2:51 PM PDT
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Is this some subliminal poem about -blam!-?

Go away you're scaring the kids.

  • 12.29.2012 2:52 PM PDT
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Bravo

[Edited on 12.29.2012 2:54 PM PST]

  • 12.29.2012 2:53 PM PDT
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Posted by: Narwhaldrillt
Is this some subliminal poem about -blam!-?

Go away you're scaring the kids.
:"(

  • 12.29.2012 3:01 PM PDT


Posted by: SHOOTMEIFUDARE
She said "you're movin with your auntie and uncle in bel-air".


^I was expecting a Bel-Air.

OT: Pretty deep, OP.

[Edited on 12.29.2012 3:04 PM PST]

  • 12.29.2012 3:03 PM PDT

''Hell is other people.''

I liked your Poem, OP. I feel the message it contains about the War in Afghanistan is very deep.

  • 12.29.2012 3:04 PM PDT
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Posted by: RedXRulez
I liked your Poem, OP. I feel the message it contains about the War in Afghanistan is very deep.
Thank you :)

  • 12.29.2012 3:06 PM PDT

''Hell is other people.''


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Posted by: RedXRulez
I liked your Poem, OP. I feel the message it contains about the War in Afghanistan is very deep.
Thank you :)
No, actually I lied. I didn't read it and randomly typed that. But, if you actually wrote a Poem about the War in Afghanistan then I'd probably read it.

  • 12.29.2012 3:08 PM PDT
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Why So Serious?

"I'm gonna go America all over everybody's asses!"
-Charlie, It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia

You suck.

  • 12.29.2012 3:09 PM PDT
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Posted by: RedXRulez

Posted by: La Petite Morte

Posted by: RedXRulez
I liked your Poem, OP. I feel the message it contains about the War in Afghanistan is very deep.
Thank you :)
No, actually I lied. I didn't read it and randomly typed that. But, if you actually wrote a Poem about the War in Afghanistan then I'd probably read it.
:(

  • 12.29.2012 3:10 PM PDT
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''Misanthropes have some admirable if paradoxical virtues. It is no exaggeration to say that we are among the nicest people you are likely to meet. Because good manners build sturdy walls, our distaste for intimacy makes us exceedingly cordial "ships that pass in the night." As long as you remain a stranger we will be your friend forever.''

''I want people to be sincere; a man of honor shouldn't speak a single word that doesn't come straight from his heart. ''


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Posted by: RedXRulez

Posted by: La Petite Morte

Posted by: RedXRulez
I liked your Poem, OP. I feel the message it contains about the War in Afghanistan is very deep.
Thank you :)
No, actually I lied. I didn't read it and randomly typed that. But, if you actually wrote a Poem about the War in Afghanistan then I'd probably read it.
:(

I have an urgent feel to post '':D''

  • 12.29.2012 3:11 PM PDT

Nice, deep poem OP.

[Edited on 12.29.2012 3:17 PM PST]

  • 12.29.2012 3:14 PM PDT
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Posted by: Alex031097
Nice, deep poem OP.
you think?

  • 12.29.2012 3:21 PM PDT
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Posted by: Powershadows
OT: Pretty deep, OP.
really?

  • 12.29.2012 4:12 PM PDT

If we disagree, it's nothing personal, opinions are opinions.
Antagonizing me to build a false sense of worth is so damn cute.

Brighten your day with science.

*Twentieth.

You posted tons on your Shadows account, all of them mediocre.

[Edited on 12.29.2012 4:13 PM PST]

  • 12.29.2012 4:13 PM PDT