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(thrash speed)
Traveling through the desert
100 days and 100 nights
I bled for the queen of the sky

So this is how it feels to die
So this is how it feels to fall
This is how it feels to be enveloped by the skies

Running amidst blood and oil
Reality saturates with confusion
Heaven keeps me numb for untold days

So this is how it feels to die
So this is how it feels to fall
I'll sit her and watch you fckin' cry

(song slows down)

The sun burns through the air
Far too rare to die
I'll just lie among the stars

Drifting through the garden of the cosmos
Hot solar winds pierce the skin
A river of fire leadin' to nowhere

Absorbed by the void of life
Time ticks slowly
Nectar of the universe driftin' into nowhere

Nowhere
Nowhere
Nowhere, yeah

(speeds up, this part is sludgy)

I awoke six feet under the sand
A feast held by worms and vultures
Slow motion picture of the world begins to fade

I come face to face with the jaded idol
Wading slowly towards the light
I scream for the stars and accept the blight

I was dead aeons ago

  • 01.05.2013 2:18 PM PDT

It would help if we heard it sung ya know

  • 01.05.2013 2:20 PM PDT

you should probably ask other people that write songs

  • 01.05.2013 2:23 PM PDT

I just thought of a tine and thought it was pretty good. My version sounded like something Dragonforce would do though.

  • 01.05.2013 2:28 PM PDT

~:O>~~

It's rhythm didn't seem consistent in the lyrics...

I like the direction, imagery and meaning of the song.

The last part really cements everything and hits hard...

Good Job.

  • 01.05.2013 2:32 PM PDT
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Posted by: DarkBen64
I just thought of a tine and thought it was pretty good. My version sounded like something Dragonforce would do though.


Dragonforce?

  • 01.05.2013 2:46 PM PDT
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Random.

  • 01.05.2013 2:56 PM PDT

<3

Posted by: Redninetynine
you should probably ask other people that write songs

  • 01.05.2013 2:58 PM PDT