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Subject: Flood, wanna give me some input on my music?

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Hey, Flood, I finished a piece of music earlier, and was wondering if you guys would want to critique it a bit.

I was going for something sort of relaxing and melodic, and this is the result, Skyline. Hope you enjoy, and any feedback you could give me, I'd really appreciate it.

Also, if you make music of any kind, feel free to post it.

  • 01.06.2013 5:18 PM PDT

A cornered fox is more dangerous than a jackal.

And from FOX, two phantoms were born.

Sounds chill so far

  • 01.06.2013 5:19 PM PDT
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Believe it OP don't care about our opinions only your own Believe it

~Believe it

  • 01.06.2013 5:19 PM PDT

Please stop complaining about the 'death of a loved one' it's my job. They probably deserved it anyways. Here's a warning, if you keep making pentagrams out of the neighbors livestock I will personally come to your house and kill everyone you love. Now leave me alone, I got to get back to work.
~M.D~

It's chill :)

  • 01.06.2013 5:20 PM PDT

Reporting for duty

Seems legit

  • 01.06.2013 5:20 PM PDT

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Posted by: BlazedStoner420
Believe it OP don't care about our opinions only your own Believe it

~Believe it

Oh, of course, I make music that I want to make and hear, but I also like knowing what you guys think so I can improve the technical merit of my productions (drums, mixing, etc). And to boost my ego, that too.

  • 01.06.2013 5:21 PM PDT
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Posted by: Qbix89
Talking about Sweden is an ultrabannable offense.

Posted by: Achronos
Too bad being completely and utterly wrong isn't a bannable offense.

Your new song is out? -blam!- yeah!

I'll give it the usual run down.

  • 01.06.2013 5:22 PM PDT

It's certainly not bad and pretty relaxing, but after a bit the constant build up and drop of the ambient part (I'm terrible at describing music) gets a little repetitive. I notice this part goes away somewhere around the 3 minute marker, and returns a bit later. Other than that, not bad.

  • 01.06.2013 5:22 PM PDT

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Posted by: CostlyAxis
It's certainly not bad and pretty relaxing, but after a bit the constant build up and drop of the ambient part (I'm terrible at describing music) gets a little repetitive. I notice this part goes away somewhere around the 3 minute marker, and returns a bit later. Other than that, not bad.

Thanks, and yeah. I couldn't think of what else to add as far as introducing elements goes, I should've just written more instead of repeating it. But thank you!

  • 01.06.2013 5:27 PM PDT
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Posted by: Qbix89
Talking about Sweden is an ultrabannable offense.

Posted by: Achronos
Too bad being completely and utterly wrong isn't a bannable offense.

Nice intro, liking the beat. The sub synth in the background is nice.

Rather odd combination of melodies though. They seem to be trying to overpower each other.

The tone is kind of jazzy-chill.

I like the breakdown though. That's pretty good. The 'central' (I'm no good at describing this -blam!-) synth line seems a little bit off key. Not so much as to ruin the song, but enough to create that discord in the symphony. The same sort of 'off-ness' that I heard before where the melodies were trying to overpower each other.

Maybe if you took that part out? A key change maybe? I dunno, I don't make music, I just listen.

Anyways, good song as always. 4/5

  • 01.06.2013 5:31 PM PDT

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Posted by: Garshne
Nice intro, liking the beat. The sub synth in the background is nice.

Rather odd combination of melodies though. They seem to be trying to overpower each other.

The tone is kind of jazzy-chill.

I like the breakdown though. That's pretty good. The 'central' (I'm no good at describing this -blam!-) synth line seems a little bit off key. Not so much as to ruin the song, but enough to create that discord in the symphony. The same sort of 'off-ness' that I heard before where the melodies were trying to overpower each other.

Maybe if you took that part out? A key change maybe? I dunno, I don't make music, I just listen.

Anyways, good song as always. 4/5

Thanks, and yeah, it is a little bit off key. I'm not super well versed as far as music goes, actually, so it's not terribly uncommon for stuff in my music to be messed up.

  • 01.06.2013 5:37 PM PDT
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Posted by: Qbix89
Talking about Sweden is an ultrabannable offense.

Posted by: Achronos
Too bad being completely and utterly wrong isn't a bannable offense.

Hey, I actually like that little bit of discord. And damn do you know how to get a good beat.

Changing Times is probably my favourite of yours. I gotta get around to getting that EP already.

  • 01.06.2013 5:38 PM PDT

I'll update your page. ;)

  • 01.06.2013 5:41 PM PDT

Finished the song, seems pretty legit. I liked it

  • 01.06.2013 5:49 PM PDT

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Posted by: LoneWolf138xX
Finished the song, seems pretty legit. I liked it

Thank you! I appreciate it! ^_^

  • 01.06.2013 5:50 PM PDT

ITS CHILLIN YO.

But srs, It's sounding good.

  • 01.06.2013 5:50 PM PDT

Check me out:
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Thank you! ^_^

Posted by: Garshne
Hey, I actually like that little bit of discord. And damn do you know how to get a good beat.

Changing Times is probably my favourite of yours. I gotta get around to getting that EP already.

Hah, thanks! And yeah, that's probably my favorite so far. And please do, enjoy!

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  • 01.06.2013 5:58 PM PDT
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Reminds me of the music in a level of Sonic Adventure 2

  • 01.06.2013 5:59 PM PDT

Just for the record, cough syrup is the bane of my existence.

It's very calm, well done.

  • 01.06.2013 6:02 PM PDT

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Posted by: SoarinWonderbolt
Reminds me of the music in a level of Sonic Adventure 2

I love that game. What level are you thinking of? :D

  • 01.06.2013 6:02 PM PDT
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Two movies you should watch: Fight Club and Pineapple Express

"Wait. What do you mean, it's dead?"
"If marijuana is not legal within the next five years I have no faith left in humanity, period. Everyone likes smoking weed. They have for thousands of years. They're not going to stop anytime soon. You know? It makes everything better. Makes food taste better, makes music better. It makes sex feel better for God's sake. It makes -blam!- movies better you know?"

I would if my internet was working properly -_-

  • 01.06.2013 6:14 PM PDT

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Posted by: Bigfoot1010
I would if my internet was working properly -_-

Hah, no problem, it's fine! If you want to check it out later, feel free too, though.

  • 01.06.2013 6:19 PM PDT
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Pretty good, a few parts don't really make that much sense musically tho

  • 01.06.2013 6:45 PM PDT

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Posted by: pleis555
Pretty good, a few parts don't really make that much sense musically tho

Thanks, and yeah, that's what happens when someone who has no musical training tries to make music.

  • 01.06.2013 6:53 PM PDT

Honestly I thought it was boring. Part of that is just the genre though. And the progression is way too repetitive. It doesn't sound "bad" though, I just didn't really enjoy it.

  • 01.06.2013 7:22 PM PDT

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