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Subject: Rain story
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Poll: Do you like it? (read the story first)  [closed]
yes:  60%
(9 Votes)
it's ok:  33%
(5 Votes)
no:  7%
(1 Votes)
mine's better (post one):  0%
(0 Votes)
Total Votes: 15

It's raining at my house, so i thought of this other multiplayer online game for halo 2. Tell me what u think.
PART 1

In this there are no vehicles since my last one got bad complaints about that. It starts at a rainy swamp.(oh and this game is where it's like a campain game, so everyone is on eachother's team) it can have 30 people. you start out at an UNGC's (I made that up since this is not space command, it's global comand. United Nations Global Command. Don't worry they are still part of the united nations.) base, you get all the weapons you want, whether it be sniper or rocket launcher, Battle rifle or smg, what ever you want. After that you report to a captain and he gives you information on your mission.He braks you up into teams based on your equipment. Snipers get dropped off at a guard site in between the destination and the base. Rocketeres and machine gunners are the people who go to infiltrate the city the covenant have taken control of. So now that you know that, I'll tell you the mission. A city has been taken over by the covenant, you must recover it. The covenant have placed turrets all over the city, after the dam broke in 2195 this city has become a giant swamp. There is a gateway that leads to the city. Snipers, after you see the foot spartans go through your area follow them, guard their backs, warn them of anemies, or anything that can help them out. Foot Spartans, go through here, he shows a map with a highlighted area and trail leading to it. Now, the covenant are acting real strange here, they are strangely interested in this place. they are building some sort of landing structure, and a communications tower. Find out what it is, and if it is a threat, destroy it with these nuclear grenades. They all take the grenade then leave and get to where instructive. You, the sniper, here a transmision from the foot Spartans. "spartans moving, keep a look out." You say "roger"

(to be continued soon. A.K.A. My rist is cramping.)

  • 05.18.2004 1:20 PM PDT
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PART 2

The spartans on ground keep going through the woods, one says "man, the map made me think this was going to be easy, but this trail sure is lo-" he stops, along with others he stares at the river in front of them. "this wasn't on the map!" the guy says. "yes it was, it was the long line, besides it's no big deal." they go in the water and walk through the river. Along here they found some covenant records. "I wonder what this says? hmmmmmm, oh well, we'll translate it when we get to the town." He holds it in his left hand. They get out of the water.

You can't help staring at the water, there is some wierd green glow, and then you see 15 spartans come out of the river. "We see you, now move northeast of your position to get to the gate." you say on the COM. "Roger" you hear. You bother to look at the base on 10x and see hundeds of covenant engineers building the landing structure. You wonder why they would bother making one since they usually land on the ground. You put that thought away and snipe an elite hiding in the bushes. "thanks" you here on the com as grunts run away in fear. The spartans on ground took them out with a roket. "what a waste of ammo." one guy said. "I think he spat at me. What else should i do?" You laugh, it's this that makes you not retire from the job.


To be continued again(I can't fell my left arm)

  • 05.18.2004 1:40 PM PDT
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Its not bad. I wish I could write stories on rainy days. I am a terrible writer. But please, continue.

  • 05.18.2004 1:57 PM PDT
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Part three


They've entered the city now. The snipers follow up to the gate, switch theiir weapons, and get alongside of the other spartans. They move up toward a building they check around it. "clear." You say.You move toward the communications tower. You and the team enter. You all slowy move across the walls. You see no one. You all go up into a room and stop. You see about 25 brutes. The team leader breathes and says "Go! Go! Go!" you take out your sniper rifle and guard the leader. The lead takes out 2 smgs . triggers them knowing he'll hit any of them. One guy takes out his rocket and shoots at a runing Brute, he should've used target traking. The rocket misses and hits a fusion core. the fusion core blows up and kills the remaining brutes and damages some spartans. "Ok let's identify these notes we found inside the river." the leader says. He takes them out and inserts them into the core. From knowledge of some covenant technology he finds the translation option. he reads through. Even though you couldn't see his face you can tell he's frightened. "OH MY GOD! They got into contact with the Forerunner?!?"

To be continued (this is just to tease you)

  • 05.18.2004 2:08 PM PDT
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The first part was good, then the rest sucked and ruined it.

  • 05.18.2004 2:12 PM PDT
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the ends good!!!!!!! continue please

  • 05.18.2004 2:19 PM PDT
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Its pretty good....better then what i could make anyway

  • 05.18.2004 2:27 PM PDT
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Part 4

"It says they got in contact with the forerunner and they are coming to settle this war!"
They all stand shock knowing they are all doomed. "We can stop them all we need to do i-" The whole room shakes. They hear a ship. They run outside. It's still raining, They see the biggest ship they've ever seen docking in the landing building. they all hurry up into the building. They walk through and see an even bigger docking area. There are so many covenant inside. The whole covenant population is. "Get ready for the biggest fight of history, GO!" They all take out rockets or throw grenades if they don't have any, they take out alot and then realize what could make them win. They have no weapons. They all go all out taking out many covenant. "Wait!" your leader says. "Maybe the forerunner is on our side?" The door to the ship opens. The obvious leader of the Forerunner comes out.He talks a little but you can tell he speaks english. "I knew they were From earth!" one guy says. The Forerunner leader comes up to the covenant and says. "We are here to say we join you the covenant on the quest to destroy all of humanity. To Show our loyalty we shall tell you a great weakness. This ship has no armor and carries all of our people. This ship is very unsafe, but we trust you." The spartans get out of the building. real happy and mad. Happy we know their weakness. Mad they joined the covenant. they knew what to do. what would end the war. The leader took out hisrocket launcher, fired it and they dropped everything and sprinted out. The ship blew up. The war was over. It's kind of funny how but, at least it's over.

  • 05.18.2004 2:28 PM PDT
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Well that's all I hope you've enjoyed it. I liked it anyway. Thank you for listening to this and sorry for the bad ending. Maybe you can think of a good ending? Yes, Guys write your own ending, or what ever part you didn't like.

[Edited on 5/18/2004 4:12:24 PM]

  • 05.18.2004 2:58 PM PDT
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pretty good story....you're a good writer/thinker of stories...

  • 06.07.2004 5:59 PM PDT
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thank you. I'm writing a book, to bad i'ts not about halo...

  • 06.07.2004 6:57 PM PDT
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Hey hey! Liton, you're back.

  • 06.07.2004 8:02 PM PDT