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Subject: linglin the ultimate grunt! a fan fic no flamming it my first!
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hello im making a fan fic if u like it bump for me if u dont dont even look at it

  • 07.23.2006 12:47 PM PDT
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kk

  • 07.23.2006 12:47 PM PDT
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I dont see a story.

  • 07.23.2006 12:49 PM PDT
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Linglin was sent on an important mission sent from the prophets he was ordered to inflitrate a human base capture a field commander by the name of commander Jesse Newell. Linglin is a commander for the grunt armies for the covanant.he has 6 squads of special forces grunts equipt with needlers and plasma rifles. He also had 4 squads of spec ops jackals, and 2 squads of blue armored elites one is equipted with an energy sword and the others with carbines and plasma rifles. But there was one person who outranked him he was a black armored elite names Rolmee. Rolmee was blessed by the prophets. Rolmee and Linglins squads where dropped off 20 units from the human base.
As Rolmee was talking to all of the squads telling them there battle plans,one jackal named jok stood up and said,"exellancy, why do i have to be commanded by a underclassed grunt. Linglin knew he was talking about him so he stood up and said,"because the prophets have ordered me to lead u into battle. Jok was so angry he pulled out his plasma pistol and charged it up aiming right at linglins face. All the grunts got up aiming all there plasma rifles at Jok and all of his jackals. All the jackals activated there energy shields and got there plasma pistols out ,and started to charge them up. Then out of no where a plasma bolt hit Jok right in the back of the head.Rolmee asked Linglin who started the fight all of the grunts and Linglin pointed to Joks headless body. And Linglin gave thanks to the elite for stopping the fight.Rolmee said one thing,"Pack all ur things lets prepare for the attack on the humans."

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  • 07.23.2006 1:04 PM PDT
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sorry i dont like to use paragraphs lol.

  • 07.23.2006 1:06 PM PDT
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hmmm i get the feeling u got this frm the halo books but the grunt was called yayap -.-

  • 07.23.2006 1:06 PM PDT
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a lil bit yea i got the name linglin and jok thats it i think. ive red all the books 3 times lol i love em

  • 07.23.2006 1:10 PM PDT
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i dont want a copyright thingy so i dont get sewed so thanks to bungie for the books which i got 2 or 3 names from

  • 07.23.2006 1:16 PM PDT
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It's not very good.

Try not using txt spk, splitting it up properly, using proper grammar and writing a good story.

CC

  • 07.23.2006 1:21 PM PDT
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im not a good typer and im only in the 10th grade

  • 07.23.2006 1:26 PM PDT
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Posted by: the killer grunt
im not a good typer and im only in the 10th grade
lol i thought u were 10 years old

  • 07.23.2006 1:27 PM PDT
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Grade and age has nothing to do with maturity, grammar, or spelling skills.

  • 07.23.2006 1:28 PM PDT
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im 15 y u say u thought i was 10 yrs old.

  • 07.23.2006 1:29 PM PDT
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lol but ill say it right know in my eyes your ants espet peopel with grutn sybols

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Posted by: the killer grunt
im not a good typer and im only in the 10th grade

Only? I typed better than you in the 6th grade! I am now in 9th.

  • 07.23.2006 1:31 PM PDT
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oh shi- every oen run for your life its a spartan!

  • 07.23.2006 1:32 PM PDT
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ok i guess ill quit the fan fic. noone likes it

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  • 07.23.2006 1:34 PM PDT
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oh and randys ---- off

  • 07.23.2006 1:39 PM PDT
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I'm also 15, I'm also in 10th grade. Do u c me tlkin lik dis?

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  • 07.23.2006 1:57 PM PDT
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im 16 so let him talk like that. i do its called text shorthands for all u kids hu aint old enough 2 no wat it is.

  • 07.23.2006 2:00 PM PDT
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http://objection.4camp.net/go.php?n=175466

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lol

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http://objection.4camp.net/go.php?n=175693

  • 07.23.2006 2:05 PM PDT
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Posted by: muy loco si
im 16 so let him talk like that. i do its called text shorthands for all u kids hu aint old enough 2 no wat it is.


I know what it is. I also know that when I use shorthand, I tend to look more childish and less educated. I've written stories in my spare time, and they are not written in shorthand. I try my best to use proper grammar and spelling so that I look professional and so that the readers' eyes don't bleed from trying to comprehend my sentences.

  • 07.23.2006 2:07 PM PDT
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http://objection.4camp.net/go.php?n=175760

http://objection.4camp.net/go.php?n=175908

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  • 07.23.2006 2:08 PM PDT

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