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Subject: linglin the ultimate grunt! a fan fic no flamming it my first!
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Posted by: EvilKitty
Grade and age has nothing to do with maturity, grammar, or spelling skills.


Erm... yes it does!? Of course it does!... That's why children are children, and not adults. Maturity means "The state or quality of being fully grown or developed".

...and grammar and spelling is learned more and more throughout school.

Think about it.

  • 07.24.2006 6:01 AM PDT
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When Linglin woke up he looked at two human guards aiming there MA5B assualt rifles at his face. "Get up you stupid grunt." said one marine. Linglin wondered if anyone would try to free him. The other guard gave him some kind of cleaning untincel that they called a mop. "Start mopping with your friends!" Then a marine pushed him into a room they call a mess hall. He saw twenty grunts, a guard hit Linglin and said." Get to cleaning!" so he started to clean the floor. Linglin went up to a grunt and asked his name, he said Nayap. Linglin then asked if he knew what happened to Rolmee. Nayap then said. " He fought aginst the demon, he was killed." Linglin was furious that his commanding officer had died. Linglin had to find a way to escape. So he told Nayap to tell everyone he could that they where going to escape, tonight. Later that day, he gathered thirty grunts and told them about his plan to escape. They all agreed to follow Linglin. That night he gathered his thirty grunts and told them to follow him. They snuck through the hall, Linglin looked around the corner. He saw the two humans that guarded him earlier that day. He told Nayap to lure them here. So Nayap ran around the corner,and yell at the guards. One of the guards said." Come here you little grunt and followed Nayap around the corner. Linglin then hit the human in the chest, the human bentover in pain then Linglin took the marines M6D pistol out his pocket, and shot the marine in the face. Linglin gave the fallen marines pistol to Nayap. Linglin then took the fallen marines assualt rifle. The other marine came around the corner to see what happened. He saw Linglin, and he tried to radio for help with his helment but Nayap shot the marine twice in the chest. A alarm went off then five humans started to run down the hall they where in, the marines fired at all thirty grunts. Linglin and Nayap got there weapons and shot back. Somehow the grunts killed all five marines. the remaning twenty-one grunts got weapons from the dead humans. Now the grunts stood a chance, most of them where armed from the human weapons. they made sure to get extra ammo. They ran as fast as they could down the halls looking for a way of escape. Then got to a door that led them outside. there wernt any marines outside. So Linglin ordered his fellow grunts to look for a way out. So a grunt named Dashu yelled " Enemy!" then there was automatic fire. All the gurnts ran toward his screams. There was five humans guarding a gate, so Linglin told all the grunts had had weapong to fire. One marine yelled." We need backup.Now!" Then one of the grunts that was firing the captured marines pistol shot him in the face. Linglin ordered all the remaining grunts to run out of the humans base. So as he ordered they ran out. Linglin was runing beside Nayap when a shot was fired, it hit Nayap in the back of the head. Linglin yelled."sniper! Get down!" so Linglin ran toward a forest beside him to his left. As soon as he got in the woods, he waited. fianlly four grunts came in the woods. They told him they where the last of them. Linglin was mad now that a friend of his was killed with the other twenty-five grunts. Linglin ordered them to follow. Linglin asked if all of them had weapons incase if they run into more humans. They nodded. They all heard a noise, they crouched down. An elite formed out of thin air, with another twenty elites, jackals and grunts. Linglin bowed and said "excellancy thank you for finding us we need aid. The elite named Zulu then replied "There is a camp two units from here, go there get food and rest. So the squad of five grunts walked back to camp.

[Edited on 7/24/2006]

  • 07.24.2006 8:42 AM PDT
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ok dont want to seem picky but why would a grunt be leading elites? when in the game do we see that, and the books clearly state the disrigard elites have for there little allies, a grunt leads other grunts but they are the lowest of the low and none others would take orders from them, except pehaps those weird engerneer thingys the covs have

  • 07.24.2006 8:48 AM PDT
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he has proved to be better than blue armored elites. plus the prophets apointed him over them.

  • 07.24.2006 8:54 AM PDT
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is the story ok?

  • 07.24.2006 8:54 AM PDT
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Bah..signatures are for the weak.........

You're in grade 10, I'm in grade 8, I can type better than you. That confuses me.

About the fanfic, it makes no sense. Elites(Sangheili) are commanders, grunts don't lead elites.

  • 07.24.2006 8:59 AM PDT
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im taking my first typing lesson next year 11th grade lol. but he was appointed over them by the prophets

  • 07.24.2006 9:03 AM PDT
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Believe me, you should well and truly be a decent writer for somebody in their tenth year of school.

Are you in a low set?

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  • 07.24.2006 9:51 AM PDT

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