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Subject: Halo poem/rap competition!
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greenapplz nice rap there, yah son ' of a biatch! lol, no i found your rap pretty cool btw!

  • 05.19.2004 2:47 PM PDT
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Yo Halo53, I'm real happy for you and I'ma let you finish, but Beyonce had one of the best bungie.net profiles of all time. OF ALL TIME!

I have never rapped before and as I am thinking of ideas, does bad language matter? I know it blams stuff out but if I used *****'s to bleep it out but you still realize what the word is. (ex: b***h) Because it is rapping and I just thought of something I thought to be quite funny but there are a couple bad words... wow I sound like a n00b but whats up with language?

  • 05.19.2004 2:54 PM PDT
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POEM!:

I golden ring lies in the sun
But this ring was not made for fun
The ring that holds life takes lives away
This ring is halo that is what I say

Not an animal or bug lives on the ground
But under the surface lives a fiend with no bounds
They eat and they live, a virus are they
And for their imprisonment they'll make all pay

As they escape from there sub-surface cells
You'll hear terrible screams and blood-curling yells
They feed and they feed, feeding on meat
They're constant war cannot be beat

Inside all life they reside
Squirming and beating, waiting to get outside
They're only wish is to feed and to feed
They're only wish is that you bleed and you bleed

Whether you human, or hunter, you elite or you Grunt
Whether you jackal or prophet, you all get on the punt
All should live together end this unholy holy war
To beat the virus, forever more

I golden ring lies in the sun
But this ring was not made for fun
The ring that holds life takes lives away
This ring is halo that is what I say
And inside this golden sun
Lies a power that will make you pay


I OWN U ALL

  • 05.19.2004 3:00 PM PDT
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its... interesting.

  • 05.19.2004 4:00 PM PDT
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interesting that was awsome... nice job.. best so far

  • 05.19.2004 4:18 PM PDT
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Tank tou

  • 05.19.2004 4:39 PM PDT
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you could also use that as a rap

  • 05.19.2004 4:43 PM PDT
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ya except rap sux ass monkey faces, its the worst type of music (if u could call it music) it takes no skill in any instrament, any singing skills and all ur lyrics are written by some1 else. GO LISTEN TO REAL MUSIC!

  • 05.19.2004 4:46 PM PDT
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whoa! four of these in a row


edit=five now

[Edited on 5/19/2004 4:47:33 PM]

  • 05.19.2004 4:47 PM PDT
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lol i agree with rap thingy and anyway anymore raps/poems?

  • 05.19.2004 4:49 PM PDT
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Yo Halo53, I'm real happy for you and I'ma let you finish, but Beyonce had one of the best bungie.net profiles of all time. OF ALL TIME!

Well I have never rapped before in my life. If I could, I would definitley send in an mp3 or a video but I don't have a mic or a video camera of some sort that was made after 1993. I may come back to edit this a few times if I think of adding something or whatever. I did win some writing contest at MSXL for their B'day bash. Well here it goes *about to suck*

Email address [email] mike53@optonline.net [/email]

Note- I am typing the words how they would be pronounced, so some spelling errors are due to pronunciation...ness


You're the Master Chief, or John one seventeen
See a covie b@****d, pumpin lead in his spleen.
Head shot after head shot, juss mowin em down
I'm the king of the hill, b***h gimme my crown.

I've got the battle rifle, with single shot or burst
You can have a piece of this, to quench your grunty thirst.
A kick @$$ way to take out an enemy's shield
Is to find two weapons, and double wield.

Anti son of a b***h stick, or energy sword
Your team will pay the price, a price they can't afford.
Wort wort wort, playing as an elite
Challenge other clans on team compete.

Playing C-T-F, team slayer and rally
His name's not caboose, his name is O'Malley
Videos like the warthog jump, or red versus blue
Will only improve, come Halo 2

You'll play with your friends, on xbox live
You can be the gunner, or you can drive
In one of the various warthogs, that'll be done by most
The rest will drive, in the Scorpion or Ghost

Whether it be the campaign, or an L-A-N,
Once you finish the game, you wanna play it again.
Now I'm gone with your flag, catch me if you can
Clang
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I didn't realize your sniper, was waiting around the bend


So ditch your kids, and divorce your wife
Cuz come November 9th, you'll lose your social life.
The greatest game ever has been made by the Bungie Crew
The only game that'll beat Halo, is Halo 2


And thats a rap :D




Just a deleted 2 line thing that I thought was kinda funny...

Wort Wort Wort, I am a Gold Elited
Wort Wort Wort, damn you just killed Pete

:D


  • 05.19.2004 5:03 PM PDT
Subject: Poem #2
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They say I'm bad
They call me evil
Why should I get mad?
I didn't kill those people

A tide rests in me
An infection, a disease
A cure, an immortality
Do not cleanse me, please

I study and work all day
And all through the night
Until one day an opponent fey
Set off an everlasting fight

They call me guilty
I think it's a lark
In me there is a Spark
And my number is 343

  • 05.19.2004 5:43 PM PDT
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alrighty, here is my sweet sweet rap....after this you'll probably see me on mtv or much music.

Uh, what, yea
you feel me
here we go

i spit dese mad ryhmes like the assault rifle
its similar to the battle rifle, yo
i don't carry much bling but i'm still the pimp of the battle grounds

don't stop, runnin
i gat you wif my over powered 9 from across the level
head shot dead, now you're on the floor
bang bang bang down go some more

grunts here and there
elitle don't give me a scare
but i give them a fist full of hurt
and a face full lead, fo shizzle my mizzle chizzle

peace out

(mizzle chizzle = master cheif)

[Edited on 5/19/2004 6:00:18 PM]

  • 05.19.2004 5:51 PM PDT

With B.B. gone, the passion of Bungie.net has lessened.

You know, I was just thinking about posting a topic like this (but not a contest)...

I'll work on something to submit.... it'll be deep, too (a poem.... I can't rap).

Anyway, I think the award should go to the guy that hacked as Endiku (?) on a bungie.org site.... his first poem was awesome.

  • 05.19.2004 6:16 PM PDT
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[color=sage] The Enkidu Terminals? those were nice........ [/color]

[Edited on 5/19/2004 6:25:40 PM]

  • 05.19.2004 6:23 PM PDT
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Lantern- Halo over a rap flow

Throw sticky grenades at elites and blow up their face
Hop into the warthog ride shotgun and start sprayin bullets like mace
Grunts and Marines dead lyin all over the place
This is the first phase we got missions to go after halo
Sandbag the flood and rapid fire with all our ammo
Get a pick-up you ain't seein us with active camo
Track you silenty we stand low and keep our eyes out
As spartans we stand out amongst other marines
Deadly accurate with sniper rifles and other machines
We can go as teams and capture the flag
Catch ya at a bad time and you might get fragged...



[Edited on 5/19/2004 6:39:31 PM]

  • 05.19.2004 6:37 PM PDT

I like my Covenant like i like my woman, screamin and with a sticky on there face.

Post snipped by moderator.

[Edited on 5/19/2004 9:15:19 PM by Shishka]

  • 05.19.2004 6:38 PM PDT

I like my Covenant like i like my woman, screamin and with a sticky on there face.

Moderator's note: If you don't like a thread, don't[ participate in it. It's that simple.

Do not use any kind of racial remark again.


[Edited on 5/19/2004 9:16:51 PM by Shishka]

  • 05.19.2004 6:40 PM PDT
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Dude, you don't need to post insults, just ignore the thread if you don't like it. Apparently, others do like it.

[Edited on 5/19/2004 6:47:44 PM]

  • 05.19.2004 6:47 PM PDT
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Damn did I make it that obvious? Guess i'll just have to try harder next time.

  • 05.19.2004 6:47 PM PDT
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Ok, i need to make a rap / poem for my english class any way so here it goes...

Once upon a time on an ancient ring
People searched for the thing
That would change the universe forever
And it ends up, its undercover

One man in green
Who is enhanced to be mean
Will weak up and meet a new enemy
Will he live to defeat them?
Just maybe

He finds the ship under attack
So he must protect humanities back
Every one relies on him
Or the living light will dim

He lands on this ancient ring
And finds no bling bling
But he finds his fellow frined
Just around the bend

But what is this place
He must move in haste
to discover
its power

It must be distroyed
and he must avoid
Must remain out of the grunts sight
Or they will bite

Slowly he walks up
All grown up
To the computer screen
What he learns
Will make any one scream

This ring is no club
It hides the flood
Which is one giant desease
which will make you plea please

It must not be toyed
it must be distoryed
as soon as possable
so earth will not be conqurable

Back to the ruined ship
with an injured hip
Then to the reactor
Which is a major factor.

He throws a grenade in the last one
Then cortona says "your done"
Through the door he runs
shooting that gun

Thats a nasty covanent
oh, its a grunt
The reactor is wildcat
ill kill this one with a bat

The reactor blows
And there he goes
Away from the ring
That terrable thing

Moving closer to earth
the place of his birth
Then he goes sleeping
He is in for an unexpeced weaking.

When he aweaks
he will have akes
He has an injury on his hip
While he jumps from this ship

Is his name bob?
And this is his job.

Lol, thats my poem thing, tell me what you think here or e-mail me at lasser8811@msn.com

  • 05.19.2004 7:04 PM PDT
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wow this even -blam!-er than litons comedy even though i liked that but this absolutely sucks. lock this piece of -blam!- it sucks. besides what are we black people or something


Heh, wow

Let me ask you: Who is the best rapper out right now? And has been for the last few years?

And what color is he?

Color means nothing, so quit with the racism, because whether you admit it or not, that's exactly what you are displaying; this a good thread, so back off

[Edited on 5/19/2004 7:15:36 PM]

  • 05.19.2004 7:12 PM PDT

With B.B. gone, the passion of Bungie.net has lessened.

Do not. EVER. Post racial stereotypes again! You're incredibly ignorant and stupid to do such things. If you don't like it, don't view the thread! Grow up.

  • 05.19.2004 7:27 PM PDT
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hey this is a GREAT thread no matter what anyone says. I agree with whoever said that if you dont like the post then dont read it.

My favorites so far are the ones by:
---Halo53 and
---Bad Karma
those ones were great because thay actually kept a kind of rythym that i could read to GREAT STUFF

dont expect me to post a rap (or poem, they are the same things just presented different ways) though, cuz i got none of those skills lol.

  • 05.19.2004 7:43 PM PDT
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Halo53 is definitly the best -blam!- rapper/poem maker in this thread
You're the Master Chief, or John one seventeen
See a covie b@****d, pumpin lead in his spleen.
Head shot after head shot, juss mowin em down
I'm the king of the hill, b***h gimme my crown.


Man john 117 pumpin lead in his spleen BOOYAH this gets my vote. Hey a suggestion, why not post a poll in a post in this thread so peoples can vote?

  • 05.19.2004 8:02 PM PDT

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