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Subject: Halo poem/rap competition!

bah

Just look at the little something I wrote.
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  • 05.19.2004 8:05 PM PDT
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Posted by: The Rip Saw
Just look at the little something I wrote.
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I was waiting for you to post to this Rip

  • 05.19.2004 8:08 PM PDT
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Yo Halo53, I'm real happy for you and I'ma let you finish, but Beyonce had one of the best bungie.net profiles of all time. OF ALL TIME!

Posted by: PrometheusRMN
hey this is a GREAT thread no matter what anyone says. I agree with whoever said that if you dont like the post then dont read it.

My favorites so far are the ones by:
---Halo53 and
---Bad Karma
those ones were great because thay actually kept a kind of rythym that i could read to GREAT STUFF

dont expect me to post a rap (or poem, they are the same things just presented different ways) though, cuz i got none of those skills lol.


Thanks :D Glad you liked it

Posted by: let me live
Halo53 is definitly the best -blam!-in rapper/poem maker in this thread
You're the Master Chief, or John one seventeen
See a covie b@****d, pumpin lead in his spleen.
Head shot after head shot, juss mowin em down
I'm the king of the hill, b***h gimme my crown.


Man john 117 pumpin lead in his spleen BOOYAH this gets my vote. Hey a suggestion, why not post a poll in a post in this thread so peoples can vote?


Haha yeah. Pumpin lead in their spleen was great. If I could sing it (not that I am a good singer. . .at all) or tape it and show you guys that part with the flag and the sniper may have been liked more. The beat changes for that one part. When I said something like

Whether it be the campaign, or an L-A-N,
Once you finish the game, you wanna play it again.
Now I'm gone with your flag, catch me if you can
Clang
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I didn't realize your sniper, was waiting around the bend

In case you didn't realize the clang is the sniper shot. :D I guess he wasn't gone after all. Well I had to throw some humor in it. Just like when I had


Head shot after head shot, juss mowin em down
I'm the king of the hill, b***h gimme my crown.

Hehe, b*7*h gimme my crown. I love that line.

Glad you guys liked it.

  • 05.19.2004 8:25 PM PDT

You're the Master Chief, or John one seventeen
See a covie b@****d, pumpin lead in his spleen.
Head shot after head shot, juss mowin em down
I'm the king of the hill, b***h gimme my crown.


Damnit, Halo53, that officially wins the award for the thing that cracked me up the most on any Bungie.net forum. Congratulations.

[Edited on 5/19/2004 8:53:30 PM]

  • 05.19.2004 8:46 PM PDT
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Yo Yo Yo,
three headshots in a row,
im on my way to a killing spree,
u cant stop me as u can see.
whether its a sniper rifle or a sub-machine gun,
ill clip u all off,
one by one.
when it comes down to it,im the king of sniper,
after im done with u,ull wish u were still in a diaper.
wen halo 2 comes out ill be sure to buy it,
u better watch out coz ill run a riot!
danielcandriveamanual@hotmail.com

  • 05.20.2004 3:35 AM PDT
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HERE IS SOME THING FOR HALO 2 ON XBOX LIVE!
YEAH,YEAH IM HERE REPRSENTING THE HALO 2 CREW,
YOU MESS WITH US THEN WE MESS WITH YOU,
3 ROUNDS OF A CLAN MATCH THEN YOUR THROUGH,
PAY ATTENTION -blam!- COS IM SPEAKING TO YOU,
I ALWAYS KNEW ALL YOU HATERS WERE -blam!-ES ,
THAT THOUGHT WAS CONFIRMED WHEN I LOOKED AT UR PICTURES LOOKS LIKE U WERE DENYED LOVE ,
CONFORT AND RICHES,SHOULD HAVE RUN AWAY -blam!- NOWS YOU IN STICHES,
NOW LET ME CALL ON A PUNK PUSSEY CALLED "SNIPER909" ,
U OWN ME IN LIFE?
ITS JUST AN ILLUSION COS WHEN MY CREW ROLL IN WE CAUSE CONFUSION I TAKE A LOOK AT YOUR LIFE AND REACH THE CONCLUSION ,
IN THE REAL WORLD YOU COULDNT SURVIVE, SO YOU GOT SUM BUCKS AND BOUGHT XBOX LIVE,
YOUR NEVER BE ME SO WHY EVEN STRIVE ,
TEST ME PUNK LETS SEE WHO STAY ALIVE!
BROUGHT TO BY SPOOKY:GAMERTAG:spOOky50k

SNIPER909 I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THAT I ONLY USED YOUR NAME COZ YOU STARTED THE THREAD NO HARD FEELINGS :P

[Edited on 5/20/2004 6:51:20 AM]

  • 05.20.2004 6:47 AM PDT
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all the raps and poems are awesome! i am currently working on ine now so it will be posted sometime today.
Calicohalo

  • 05.20.2004 6:51 AM PDT
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Well, this poem has been around for a while, but I wrote it, so what the heck? It's called the Marine's Requiem.

Blood.
Slipping, dripping, rivers flowing,
The sources of it are unknowing
Whether they be living or dying.
Some of them have just stopped trying.

Sweat.
Toil of labor for the home
To defeat the Covenant (as they are known)
And defend their beloved earthly home.
Their love of country has been shown.

Tears.
Rolling down a soldier's cheek
As he wanders, lost and weak.
What is it that he does seek?
Rest from battle's cursed reek.

Remember the dead Marines.

  • 05.20.2004 8:13 AM PDT
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Man Sanguinarius that is good. Nice job

  • 05.20.2004 8:22 AM PDT
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Thanks, calico. If I end up submitting any others, they'll probably end up being more of my old stuff from H.B.O. :)

  • 05.20.2004 8:25 AM PDT
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well i guess i cant post mine since its done but i will still post mine just for fun later
good luck to all

  • 05.20.2004 8:40 AM PDT

With B.B. gone, the passion of Bungie.net has lessened.

Here's mine (a poem)...

Our names ore no more than mere memories,
Our psts are cloaked, hidden,... myseries.
We have fought long and hard in this War,
Yet our names will not be in history.

We have watched skies burn,
As if the air was on fire.
We have watched oceans boil,
Planets glassed by an enemy so frightening, so dire.

Many of our kind are now gone,
Their lives brutally and unfairly taken away.
Burned alive, nuked, lost in space, broken...
But their killers shall be made to pay.

We have seen great war ships in space,
Fighting, often hopelessly, against this powerful foe.
It always ends the same,
With ships and planets being set aglow.

We are regarded as outsiders by some,
By others, as near-mythological, invincible.
Only ourselves and few others know what we truely are,
And that is Human, no different from anyone, by any principle.

We have walked amongst thousands of broken bodies,
"Victorious," with corpses at our feet.
We have fought long and hard in this War,
But the Covenant Drums have not ceased to beat.

We are -087,
We are -104,
We are -043,
We are -058,
We are -117.

We are Spartans, always fighting, never resting.
We are different, but same.
We have fought long and hard in this War,
But the Covenant are not yet tamed.


Possible titles: "We are Spartans," or "The Drums of War Continue." I'm bad with titles, and I'm working on more possible ones.

If I win, is it possible for me to be notified via Bungie.net messaging? I don't have an Email that I use often... If this can't be done, tell me, and I'll make a new email (I'm not saying I'm going to win... only if).

  • 05.20.2004 12:59 PM PDT

With B.B. gone, the passion of Bungie.net has lessened.

Competition closed? NO!

That was a rather short competition... didn't give me any time :-(...

  • 05.20.2004 1:02 PM PDT

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