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Chapter 1
200 Hours July 19,2857

"Where are they?"
"Who?" I answered.
"The enemies man. I'm combat ready." He made a small grin.The soldier was a short blonde that was holding his rifle closely.I looked at my gun.It was polished and new.We all got our weapons 15 minutes before departure. Our weapons depended on our rank and role of the squad and platoon.I got a R14X SMG that was black and shiny. The soldier that was talking had a M89G Shotgun. He then loaded a couple of bullets in the shotgun and pumped it.
"What's your name?" I asked.
"Cpl.Tom West"he replied
"Where are we headed to anyway?"he asked.West was reloading his K17T pistol.
"Camp Lincoln. They're gonna give us orders there."
"Alright soldiers get off the airship.It needs to be refueled." It was Platoon Sergeant Jack Thompson.
Everybody got off the airship and headed to a small building that was supposed to be an airport. After a few minutes Julie Johnson ran up to me and said, "I gotta go.All the nurses are being redirected."
She smiled sweetly and went aboard an airship.
“She’s your girlfriend?” a guy asked.
“Nah, just a friend I met a couple of weeks ago.” I replied.
“Alright get back in the ship, soldiers!” The sergeant ordered.
Everybody ran back to the airship. When I went back inside the ship the seat I was sitting before was taken.
“Hey, sit here!” a voice said.It was West.I ran to where he was sitting and sat beside him.
“Hey was that hot chick your girlfriend?” he asked.
“Nah, just a friend of mine.”I replied.
“You look great together though,” he said.
“You’re joking, right?” I looked at him.
“I’m serious man.You really look good together.”he answered.
“What’s your name anyway?” West asked.
“Oh, my name’s Ryan Jones.” I replied.
“What rank?” he asked again.
“Squad leader,” I replied back.
“Nice, I’ve never talked to a squad leader before.”West said.I gave him a grin.
“We’ll be landing in Camp Lincoln in just a few minutes.” A voice in the intercom announced.I turned on my H.U.D. and looked at the ammunition counter.It said 6 clips.
Good enough, I thought.
“Hey West how many rounds do u have?” There was no answer. I turned around and saw that he was asleep.


[Edited on 7/30/2006]

  • 07.28.2006 11:28 AM PDT
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pretty intersting good job send me a message when ch. 2 is done ok, peace

  • 07.28.2006 11:38 AM PDT
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thx im currently working on chapter 2.it should be done around three days from now.thx for appreciating

  • 07.28.2006 11:46 AM PDT
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i finished chapter 2 take a look.



Chapter 2
1400 Hours July 19,2857


I didn’t sleep during the ride. I was busy thinking about Camp Lincoln. What orders are they gonna give us? I was going to sleep when there was a loud thud.

“Get up, soldiers!” The sergeant shouted. Everyone immediately stood up. He ordered everybody to stand up outside and line up with the rest of their squads. I lined up with the rest of 3rd squad. The moon was showing and it was a good thing because the sergeant immediately told us that we had to stand up for about 3 hours. Everybody groaned. “Don’t you groan you pathetic babies! 3 hours isn’t long!” But it was. Some guys had sleepy eyes and couldn’t manage to stand.


A long time later I checked my watch. 5:12 A.M. Then everybody stood up straight when the sarge arrived.

“Alright Baker company, each squad has their own barrack. “ 1st squad the barrack over there.” The sarge pointed at a medium sized barrack. “ 2nd squad over there.” He pointed at a large barrack. “3rd squad over there.” He pointed at a small barrack. It was the smallest I could see in the whole camp. I walked with the rest of 3rd squad to the barrack. It was dirty even though it was still dark. But I didn’t care. I was as dog tired as everybody was. Everybody picked their own bunk bed and slept. I went to a bunk bed near the door. I immediately lied down but I saw West. He was searching for a bed. Considering he offered a seat to me at the airship, I said, “Hey, West over here.” He walked near me and climbed at the top bunk. I then closed my eyes and quickly slept.

Posted by: Dark Hunter1069
pretty intersting good job send me a message when ch. 2 is done ok, peace

  • 07.28.2006 12:18 PM PDT
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Yet anouther good job, bravo, can't wait for ch. 3

  • 07.28.2006 3:29 PM PDT
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thx 4 ur support so far chapter 3 is gonna include:

*Jones and West shipped out to camp Washington
*the 1st mission


currently working on it

  • 07.30.2006 7:04 PM PDT
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them marines like them shiny guns

  • 07.30.2006 9:03 PM PDT
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Posted by: loosemoose343
them marines like them shiny guns



lol.i made those weapons up.nice sig

  • 07.31.2006 2:39 PM PDT
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i finished ch.3 take a close look.







Chapter 3
700 hours
July 20, 2857


“Johnson, Andy” the sarge called out.
“You’re going to be sent to Camp Travis,” he continued.
“Jones, Ryan” the sarge called out.
“You’re going to be sent to Camp Washington.” He said.
I gulped. Camp Washington was one of the toughest camps around.
“Don’t worry,kid your gonna be alright.” He said as if reading my mind.
He ordered me to get into a waiting room for airships. Then, my luck ran out. After waiting the whole day, all the operators said that I would have to wait till tomorrow so that I could get an airship. It seemed as if the pilot of the airship that was going to Camp Washington didn’t arrive on schedule.
I went back to the barracks and slept most of the day. I didn’t really notice I was that tired. Then when I woke up, I thought about Julie Johnson, the nurse that left in the airport. Where was she now? I guess she was probably sent out to aid the soldiers that were wounded in the battlefield. While me, the soldier was in the barracks. I felt disappointed but lucky. Lucky because I would’ve been killed in action by now. The next day I was called out to the waiting room again this time with West and a private named Willis. Willis was quiet and didn’t say anything. West was toying with his helmet he kept making fun of anything around him. Then about 2 hours later the officers told us that an A-16X Eagle airship was waiting for us. It was a total relief. They lead us to the airship and said goodbye. The ride was uneventful. When we arrived at Camp Washington, I looked around. I’ve never been to Camp Washington. I wondered where my squad was. The last time I saw them was in Camp Jackson.
“Welcome to Camp Washington gentleman.” An officer told us. He saluted us and we saluted him back.
“You will all be given mission briefings at the briefing room. Follow me please.” He motioned us to follow.
We went inside a narrow hallway that was empty. Then at the end of the hallway was a sign to a door that said, “Briefing Room”.
A lieutenant saluted us and said, “Alright lets get down to business. Please sit down at the chairs.” We sat down.
“All of you will be at the same squad, 5th squad. It is our newest squad. Sgt. Jones will be leading you in your first mission. You will be introduced to the other soldiers later. Well, it seems that there have been some kidnappings around lately. The most recent one was basketball star Mike Harcourt’s daughter. You will be sent on a patrol at a certain location.” He showed us a hologram of a little town.
“You will be scouting the enemy base tomorrow night. You will have to get 2 certain prisoners.” The hologram changed and it showed pictures of two men.
“Those are the men you will have to arrest. The one on your left is Michael Garcia. He is one of the top 10 most wanted people in America. He has been accused of beheadings, kidnappings, multiple bank thefts and other things. The one to your right is Harry Verbatim. He is a French criminal and is accused of beheadings, bomb explosions and other multiple things.” You will be introduced to your squad tomorrow morning. You are dismissed.” We exchanged salutes and were lead out of the room. The other guards lead us to a large room with 3 large bunk beds.
“Enjoy,” one of the guards said and they left.
Then, I remembered something about Camp Washington. It maybe one the toughest camps in the world but it was also one of the richest camps. The bunk beds were very comfortable and I slept the whole day.




  • 07.31.2006 4:34 PM PDT
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Very detailed

  • 08.04.2006 9:40 AM PDT
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thx for ur support and this is not the marines this is the army.just to make it more original.chapter 4 will be coming soon.^_^

  • 08.04.2006 9:59 AM PDT
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finally here come chapter 4!!!!




Chapter 4
1000 hours
July 21, 2857


“Right this way please.” The guard told us. He was leading us to a room where we would meet the squad. He opened the door.
“Look whose our squad leader is!” a soldier said. It was Cpl. McDonald.
“Hey!” I shouted. It was my squad back in Camp Jackson. Everybody was shouting and exchanging high fives.
“Wait, you know these guys?” West asked.
“Of course, they’re my squad back in Camp Jackson.” I replied.
“Oh,”he sounded disappointed.
“We need to get ready c’mon.” I said.
We went to the gunroom of the camp and got supplies. I got an M84T pistol out of the pistol rack and got 4 clips. Then I picked up 2 more clips for my smg. I also got another smg and picked up 5 clips. I got 2 frag grenades. I also picked up a C10 explosive and one smoke grenade. I turned on my H.U.D. and saw that I was carrying 89 pounds. That’s alright, I thought. When everybody was done we got out of the room.




I looked at my watch: 7:00 p.m.We were waiting for the K16-T Hawk to pick us up for the mission. Then, I saw it land near us and we ran for it. When I got in, everybody was already seated. I sat near Jason Gonzales, my best friend.
“Are you nervous Jason?” I asked him after I sat down.
“Nah, whatever happens just happens.After all that is what the Army is all about.”he replied.Then I remembered that Jason had nerves of steel. He always knew what to do on any situation. Even though he wasn’t a really good shot, he was pretty good.



A few minutes later, the pilot said over the intercom, “Alright boys, get ready.”
“You guys know what to do?” I asked them. They nodded. I turned on my H.U. D. I was all set. I touched my jetpack to check it. Then suddenly the pilot said, “Alright jump!” The light turned green and we jumped out of the airship. The wind was blowing smoothly just as I had expected. I then turned on my jetpack to land safely on the ground. Jason, me, and McDonald all touched on the same spot. I immediately got rid of my jetpack and ran to look for the other guys. McDonald and Jason followed close behind after a few seconds. Then surprisingly, something behind a bush moved. I quickly realized that one of my 2 submachine guns were gone. I quickly got the other one out of my back and aimed at the bush. Then suddenly, an armed man stood up with his gun pointed at me. I quickly pulled the trigger and shot him in the chest. I didn’t try to see his dead body.
“C’mon guys follow me,” I ordered.
Then, I heard a voice over the radio on my helmet. “Sir, we’re in big trouble in here sir. The terrorists are outnumbering us.” It was Pvt. Robert Washington. “Where are you private?” I questioned. “ I don’t know sir we’ve never been here before.” He replied. I could here a gun battle raging on. “Alright private we’ll try to get there ASAP.” I replied. “Yes sir, over and out.” He said and then there was silence.
“Guys we gotta hurry, Washington’s team is in trouble.” I ordered McDonald and Jason.
They nodded and we ran as fast as we could. Then, I peeked out a bush and saw the gun battle. I instantly pulled the pin off of one of my smoke grenades to help Washington’s team out. I made a hand signal to McDonald and Jason to follow. We ran quickly to where Washington’s team was. All the guys were suppressing fire except Washington. He was hiding behind a barrel like a puppy getting kicked around too much. He was holding his hands over his head. Bullets were flying around.
“What the hells are you doing private!” I shouted at him.
“ I don’t know, sir. I’m scared.” he replied.
I sighed. I crouched and shot a guy that was spraying bullets all over us. Jason then threw a grenade and said to me, “ We gotta get outta here!”
I reloaded my gun and nodded. I then threw a smoke grenade and ordered them to get out except for Jason and Dan Allison, our sniper. Everybody understood and got out except the ones I mentioned. Allison was picking off the enemies. I then threw a fragmentation grenade to the enemies. Dust from the ground covered the terrorists giving us enough time to withdraw. We quickly ran out of there like chickens and got to the extraction point with the rest of the squad and waited for the airship.

  • 08.07.2006 3:34 PM PDT
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What does this have to do with halo? It takes place three hundread years after halo.

  • 08.07.2006 4:54 PM PDT
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ull see.and anyway it a FANFic!im no trying to make u mad death but its a fanfic.if u dont like it dont read it.

  • 08.07.2006 5:56 PM PDT
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I'm not mad i'm just saying what is the fan fic based on?

Not halo? Then it doesnt belong here. May i reccomend... Fanfiction.net

  • 08.07.2006 6:10 PM PDT
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yeah i already tried that.my pen name is nighthunder.anyway, im just trying to make the readers of the forum have a good time.^_^

  • 08.07.2006 6:20 PM PDT
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In which case it belongs in the Flood

But i will say nothing more and just keep my opinion out of this thread from now on.

[Edited on 8/7/2006]

  • 08.07.2006 6:31 PM PDT
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thank u and ill try to post it there thx for the idea.(ive been thinking of it before)also u could post whatever u want as long as its not mean and does not violate the rules.thx for ur opinion anyway

  • 08.07.2006 6:35 PM PDT
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Your welcome.

It's nice to see a polite new member. Your also obviously young and i think its great to see kids writing and reading.

  • 08.07.2006 6:42 PM PDT
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umm im actually 14 but thx for the comment.what do u think of the story so far death?

  • 08.07.2006 6:46 PM PDT
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I'll be using the PM to prevent bumping/Spamming

  • 08.07.2006 6:51 PM PDT
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anyway for those who have been reading these stories like dark hunter and loosemoose ill try to finish ch4 tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.itll include some very nice twists and a new kind of enemy.

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Chapter 5
100 hours
July 22, 2857



My squad and I waited for 3 long hours on the extraction point. My watch said it was 1:00 A.M. then out of the darkness came our pick up ship. Everybody immediately dashed to the airship and seated. When I seated I joked at the guys, “We should’ve gotten out there and killed more terrorists,” Some of the guys grinned and snickered. The others were silent. I guess it was a bad mission because we failed to complete our objectives. “ You failed us Jones, you made us fail our mission.” West said.
“ Hey West you ever been a squad leader before? You don’t know how to make up your mind from choosing if you pull back and get all of your teammates alive or letting them die in front of you just to take two prisoners. You don’t know how hard to make that decision West. I pulled back to save our butts out of there. I saved your life, West you don’t know how close you were to getting killed.” I replied honestly. What I said was true. It was how I felt.

Suddenly, something hit the bottom of the airship.
“ What is it?” I asked over the intercom.
“ We don’t know, sir. I think its artillery.” The pilot replied.
Just great, I thought.
“ What do we do?” I questioned.
“ We just have to keep moving.”
Then another strike hit us then another. There were explosions everywhere. Then a fourth strike hit us.
“ We have to abandon the airship.” The pilot stated over the intercom.
“ Ok, get ready guys.” I said.
We got jetpacks that we received under the seats. “We’re ready,” Jason called out. The lights suddenly turned from white to red and it started blinking. I then stood up in the edge.

Then, I jumped. The wind was blowing coolly now and it was colder. I turned my jetpack just on the right time to land on the ground smoothly. Luckily, my squad and I landed on the same area this time. We could hear faint gunshots from where we were. I checked to see what the temperature was from my H.U.D. It showed 68 degrees Fahrenheit. It was the coldest temperature of the fall season so far.
“ It sure is cold, Ryan.” Jason remarked.
“ Yeah, I know.” I replied.
“C’mon let’s go try to find the ruins of the airship.” I suggested.
I walked down the pathway in front of us confident that the other soldiers would follow closely behind. I stopped when I saw the ruins of a tank and a machinegun nest. Smoke was still trailing from the tank, which meant that these objects were newly destroyed.
Our boots made squeaky sounds as we walked.
“ Get some supplies as you can, boys.” I told them.
Suddenly, there was a big explosion and it knocked Jason and Allison down.
“ Get up guys, all of you suppressing fire!” I shouted at the top of my lungs.
Everybody followed the order and started firing. I walked over to Jason and Allison. I could see that Allison was slightly wounded.
“ Don’t worry about it, sir I can take care of myself.” Allison said as bullets wheezed past me. I looked at Jason, but he was already firing his weapon. I smiled because I knew as well as anybody that he was the bravest around.
“ Crap!” Cpl. Mark Robinson exclaimed.
“ What is it?” I asked.
“ Tanks, snipers and artillery!” he answered. I turned around and saw that he was right. I got a little bit scared, but I knew that my men depended on me. Surprisingly, a grenade flew off in our direction and landed right in front of West. I immediately ran and threw the grenade back just in time.
“ Thanks,” West stated.
“ Just keep firing,” I ordered.
Shots were being fired everywhere. I shot a terrorist in the chest and another one in the head. Suddenly, another blast flew in our direction but missed our spot. Shrapnel was flying everywhere. Then unexpectedly, a single bullet was fired and it landed on Private First Class Greg Johnson.
“ Damn sniper,” I whispered. I quickly dashed to him. Greg was lying down on the ground with blood gushing down his stomach.
“ Help me, Ryan.” He pleaded. Greg was also one of my closest friends. He was pretty silent, but he told us of the story of his life and other things that troubled him. I could feel little tears coming through my eyes even though they couldn’t see it because of my helmet. I pulled back West from the line and said, “You take care of Greg. Keep him alive.” West nodded
I got really mad and ordered, “ Covering fire!” Bullets suddenly got louder. I got out of our position and ran in the direction of the enemy.
“ What the hell are you doing, Ryan?” Jason shouted.
“ No idea!” I shouted back as I got closer to the tank. I immediately climbed it, opened the top cover, and tossed 2 grenades inside. I immediately jumped out as the tank blew up. A man got out from inside as he was burning with fire. He dropped and rolled on the ground.
I heard the bullets of a machinegun and took cover using the tank. I quickly managed to get a grenade and pull the pin. I then threw a grenade to where the machinegun was while it reloaded. The gunner didn’t notice the grenade. He kept reloading until the sudden boom of the grenade blew him to pieces. I noticed that the terrorists were retreating. I quickly tried to run back to our position while the terrorists were retreating.
When I got back the guys weren’t firing but standing in a circle around something. I quickly broke the circle and saw that it was Greg’s dead body.


  • 08.08.2006 9:15 AM PDT