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Subject: Halo story (my own little creation)
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Hey all. I am in the makings of a short story explaining the fall of Harvest. I am still writing, but just wanted to give you a heads up of what to come. It will be titled "Target: Harvest." The writing style will be very familiar to the other halo books and I am trying to incorporate as much information that I know into the text. For all those that are bored, here is a sneak preview of the story in the makings:

February 3, 2525/ Harvest/ 13:00:57/ Aboard the Argo.

“What in God’s name was that Lieutenant?!”
“Sir! We have a hull breach in sector 9, damage report is underway.”
“Get me the starboard side cameras on monitor 11, stat.”
“On it.”
“Damascus do you have any identification of that enemy vessel?”

The glowing white body of a human AI appeared above the control panel. Its warrior-like figure expressed its loyalty and discipline.

“No captain, this is an unknown vessel. In fact, I have never even seen the likings of this ship. I am go- Prepare for impact!”

A blue plasma beam soared through space and hit the scout ship Argo. When the UNSC first got word that harvest was under attack, the Argo was sent out for further investigation of the scene.

“Damage report… t-o-d-a-y…”
“Going sir. I don’t believe it.”
“Believe what lieutenant?”
“That beam… that beam just impacted in sector 9, the exact same place it impacted before. I have never seen such accuracy.”
“My calculations show that the probability of our technology being capable of reaching that accuracy is one to fifty-thousand nine-hundred seventy-eight. I am going to try and tap into there computer systems.”
“Good Damascus, tha- God dang it were we hit again?!”
“Sir, yes sir. And that’s not all; enemy boarding vessels are entering through the breached hull. Estimated time of arrival… is 30 seconds.”

  • 05.19.2004 7:41 PM PDT
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too long dont want to read it

  • 05.19.2004 7:42 PM PDT
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very nice id copy it and post it everywhere c if it catches on

  • 05.19.2004 7:43 PM PDT
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Thats up to you, that's like if you saw the Halo books and said, "it's too long, I don't want to read it."

  • 05.19.2004 7:44 PM PDT
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Caboose is lazy

Nice, but it needs one thing that is necessary for fun to read stories

DETAIL LOTS AND LOTS OF DETAIL!!!!!

Just so ya know.

  • 05.19.2004 7:44 PM PDT
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it was goood an i red everythin bout 50 million times i culdnt get enough of it and id like 2 hear what u think will be goin on in halo 2 like how the war will end an stuff

  • 05.19.2004 7:46 PM PDT
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Yo Halo53, I'm real happy for you and I'ma let you finish, but Beyonce had one of the best bungie.net profiles of all time. OF ALL TIME!

Man, I started a fan fiction thing over a year ago, before Halo: The flood was even out, so some of my predicitons and stuff are way off. I haven't added to it for a couple of months. I have like 20 or so parts, or chapters, or whatever so far.

Thats pretty good. Good job.

  • 05.19.2004 7:53 PM PDT
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Thanks guys, I will try to make this as enjoyable (while not straying off too far from the realism, lol) as I possibly can. Expect it as late as this weekend. As early as Thursday or Friday.

  • 05.19.2004 7:57 PM PDT