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Subject: Fan-Fic A different point of view

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Truth and Reconciliation , Halo Infinities , Council of the Rising

yo. this is my first piece so if i make a mistake, please point it out. thanx.

Chapter 1- The assignment
Troop 112 walked down to the chambers. He was to meet the Gravemind for his next assignment. As he walked, he noticed human and Covenant bodies being dragged to Storage. Although he could not see anything in his host body, for the eyes had been ripped out, this Elite he was inhabiting seemed to have an excellent sense of smell. At last he had gotten to the high king's chambers. A voice of an old human told 112 to walk through. Even though 112 had been in here many, many times, he was nervous every single time. For some reason which he could not understand, today he was feeling a bit... brave. He casually shrugged it off, and entered.

<welcome, troop 112>
As was the tradition, 112 hastily bowed down and exclaimed< Holy Gravemind, troop 67 has told me that Halo has been destroyed! One of MY platoons was stationed there. is this true?>
< no. halo has not been destroyed. we are still on our mission>
< but sir, what is our mission.? 67 has told me all we have been doing is finding host bodies!
< 67 lies, 112. He is a heretic, and will be burned with that damned oracle' s sentinal beams. do not forget, 112. Our mission is to amass an army so great so that we may find any human or alien foolish enough to starve us.
< Holy Gravemind, what object could do such a thing?
< Halo, 112. Halo is our biggest and most important objective

<end of chapter 1> I know this is pretty bad, but as you can probably see, I'm doing it as a point of view from a flood infection form(in a combat body) I'd like any comments or complaints you have, thanks.

(next chapter either tomorrow, saturday, or sunday.

And, one more thing. if my friend aka lion, reads this: I TOLD YOU SO!!!!

[Edited on 9/19/2006]

  • 09.19.2006 10:40 PM PDT

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Truth and Reconciliation , Halo Infinities , Council of the Rising

in case anyone wants the next chapter, ill be doing it either tonight or tomorrow

  • 09.20.2006 2:19 PM PDT
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It's an interesting idea to tell a story from the flood's point of view. However, I kind of got hung up on the whole number designation thing. I doubt that the flood had such designations, and if they did, I doubt we'd encounter a form with a designation as low as 112 or 67. More like 476,003. other than that, Nice work It's got what looks to be a very engaging plot line.

  • 09.20.2006 9:41 PM PDT

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thanks. i'll put your suggestions in my next chapter


thanks again!!! :-)

  • 09.23.2006 3:49 PM PDT

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Chapter 2- Buckle Up

Troop 112,000 marched into the briefing room. The Gravemind had promoted him three full ranks, indicated by how many 0s he had at the end of his classification number. The briefing room was full; about 200 host bodies were standing, their ears towards General 14,000,000. 112,000 stood in the back row, though he could hear perfect with this Elite's super-sensitive ears.
<Attention!!> shouted the General
112,000 heard all of the others in the room stand up straighter. One soldier fell to the ground; his hosts legs cracked sickengly. The troop, a new blood, dragged himself to Hostlock, where he would get another host.
< The Holy Gravemind has given us a mission. We are to stop all that wish to activate Halo. We cannot afford to let our citizens starve like they did in 2143. You will be given the best tools for the job, including captured Active Camoflauge. You will move out in a couple hours. We will transport you to Halo, where you will wait. Eventually humans and covenant will come. You are to eliminate them, produce more infectoids, and grow a massive platoon of soldiers. You will assault every enemy you see with no mercy. This is the moment of decision. We will win. Am I clear,troops?

Like everyone else, 112,000 shouted Yes Sir. He had his own plans, though...

<to be continued>

thanks again, especially to SO34 for giving me suggestions. expect the next chapter in a few days. thanks

  • 09.23.2006 4:34 PM PDT