- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
While the update was extremely funny, you should have an Englsih major proof it before you post it up on the interweb for the masses to critique. There were one syntax error, at least, in addition to a couple verb tense mistake. And fragment.
Creativity = A+. Journalistic Skillz = C-
I did enjoy the content very much, including the "Adventures of:" section, but find ripping on Marty to be a little passe. The man is a sonic evil genius. You should definitely rip on Frankie instead, he could at least flame you back in a future update with perfect English. Also, Frankie would be a lot easier to rip on nonfictionally, as opposed to a fictional "M.O."
I will start a chapter for the Defense of the O'Donnell. Soon
I was missing the update before you came through in the clutch.
Way to go kid.
Sincerely,
The Snucka
[Edited on 10/8/2006]