- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Posted by: Master Kim
Posted by: I_O_U_1_Name
Two more typos: "i" should be capotolised, and ,yet again, no puncuation at the end.
I just felt like being a smart alic and posting that.
Three errors: it's spelled capitalized. The word "yet" should be spaced once after the comma, and the comma shouldn't even be there in general. Finally, it's smart alec, not "alic."
Don't be an ass about his poor English, that's my job. :P
Yeah, I know made those errors. I make them all the time, so I don't make a big deal over them if there small ones.
The only reason I bothered with that is because he threatened to hack anyone who made a big deal over typos. Normaly, I don't give a $h!t about typos unless there's hundreds of them.
Anyway....
Pretty good, but think the choice of song is off, but that's just me.