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Subject: Halo: Unggoy Evolved (Fan-Fic)

"If by life or death, I can protect you, I will. You have my sword.". A second later, the other Elite moved closer and said "And you have my rifle.". 'Latume then looked down on the Grunt sargeant and said "And my fists."

^ Funny

[Edited on 05.04.2007 7:13 PM PDT]

  • 05.04.2007 7:12 PM PDT

Well, I have now returned from the City of Silva Dollas, and this long day is comin' to an end. I hope y'all enjoy the new chapter:

Chapter 21: Oh, Snap!

'Latume activated his trusty energy sword, holding a strong grip on it with his right hand. As he turned backwards, the large, bolbous brain form stood, along with dozens of both combat and infection forms alike.
"Oh, it would seem as though you've found yourself in a bit of a pickle, eh?", said Sparky sarcastically, standing infront of the hordes of flood inside of the control room.
To Hell with these beasts. I must regroup with the Unggoy., 'Latume thought, waiting for the precise moment to make a run for it.

The Grunts boarded the Phantom, accompanied by the two silver-clad Elites by the names of 'Masta and 'Rtay. "Forerunners, be praised!", 'Masta exclaimed.
"Err...Alrighty then," the Grunt sargeant remarked, "Any idea where this hunk of metal is?"
"Luckily," 'Rtay replied, "we placed a tracking system inside of the demon once he was imprisoned. Although we are unable to confirm his exact location, we do know when he is nearby."
'Rtay paused for a moment, moved towards the monitor on the far side of the wall, and began pressing a series of buttons with his left hand. With that, a small grid appeared on the screen, ressembling a map of The Truth and Reconciliation. On the top, right-hand corner of the grid, a small red dot began to rapidly flash.
"Well?", PIlow asked.
"By the rings, the demon is among us!"

Just as 'Latume was about to make his exit, the flashing auto-doors infront of him pealed open, revealing the Master Chief standing before him.
"Watch out, Chief!", spoke Cortana from inside of the Chief's helmet, as 'Latume hesitently charged forward; he missed. The Master Chief faced 'Latume, firing dozens of armor-piercing bullets from his Assault Rifle; the Zealot's shields were drained half-way, and just as the strangely-armored beast was about to feed another clip into his weapon, dozens of infection forms hopped onto him, slowly depleting his shields.
"Forget about the captain, Chief! We need to get out of here!", Cortana barked.
"But what about the-"
"Now!"
The Chief nodded, heading back through the sliding doors behind him, and out of sight within a matter of seconds. As 'Latume charged after him, however, he was immediately latched onto by a flood infection form from behind; his vision blurred, as the rest of his body fell flat onto the cold, metal flooring.

[Edited on 05.05.2007 10:34 PM PDT]

  • 05.05.2007 9:15 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

and then.....Sergeant comes and kills the newly infect Elite. Ending it by saying "Die with Honor" lol. Nice one

  • 05.06.2007 7:41 PM PDT
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*yawn* Another good read Rare!!! Oh man im really srry about not posting another chapter of SIA *groans* I have a grade 8 portfolio to due and im still working on it . It's due tommorow and its about 1:24am where i live

  • 05.06.2007 10:24 PM PDT

"Men cry not for themselves, but their comrades."

"A hero need not speak. When he is gone, the world will speak for him."

I gotta say, this is definitely your best fan-fic in the Grunt Rebellion series. Awesome touch with The Lord of the Rings! Keep it up!

Also, I was wondering: is this going to be the last fan-fic in the Grunt Rebellion series?

  • 05.07.2007 1:02 PM PDT
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A good question o.0

  • 05.07.2007 6:58 PM PDT

Posted by: Arbiter of H3
Also, I was wondering: is this going to be the last fan-fic in the Grunt Rebellion series?
A good question. Right now, I'm not really sure. Once I'm done telling their story from Halo: CE, the fan-fic will go without chapters for perhaps a month or two. Afterward, I will probably start posting their story for Halo 2 (most likely in the same thread as this), and eventually up to Halo 3 near the end of the year. I only hope most of you have the patience to keep up with it for that long, though, hehe. So while I am taking a break on the fan-fic once the first side of it is finished-Just as I would once I finish any fan-fic-they are all connected into one, long story.

[Edited on 05.08.2007 12:58 PM PDT]

  • 05.08.2007 12:50 PM PDT
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Like the Lord of the Rings . . .
Lord Grunts of the Holy Rings.

  • 05.09.2007 6:55 PM PDT

Posted by: Sludgee
Like the Lord of the Rings . . .
Lord Grunts of the Holy Rings.
I lol'd.

Anyway, not sure if there will be a new chapter posted this week. I originally didn't plan to do a chapter last week, either, but I was suprisingly wide awake when I returned from Branson. As for this Saturday, however, I'll be seein' Spider-Man 3 (again) with a few o' me peeps. Still not sure when the film starts, or what time I'll be back. I'll just have to see.

[Edited on 05.09.2007 9:37 PM PDT]

  • 05.09.2007 8:42 PM PDT

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Great chapter, but shouldn't the Master Chief take the neural implants from Keyes before he leaves? And NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Lutame is a flood!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 05.10.2007 9:44 PM PDT

Legend....................(wait for it)..........ary.

in the next chapter, do you have to pay $4 over and over and over again to go to places you've already been before in previous chapters? because in real life, on halo 2, it's aweeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeee.

  • 05.10.2007 9:57 PM PDT

Posted by: blackke7995
Great chapter, but shouldn't the Master Chief take the neural implants from Keyes before he leaves? And NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Lutame is a flood!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the feedback, although that issue with the Chief was just to add some humor to the chapter in that there's such a large amount of Flood in the control room that even Cortana herself-despite being the AI that she is-is so scared out of her wits that she begins to have second thoughts about completing the mission (for now, anyway).

[Edited on 05.11.2007 5:16 AM PDT]

  • 05.11.2007 5:14 AM PDT
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"Clean-up in Chief's helmet!"

  • 05.11.2007 7:56 PM PDT

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Posted by: Rare_Spartan
Posted by: blackke7995
Great chapter, but shouldn't the Master Chief take the neural implants from Keyes before he leaves? And NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Lutame is a flood!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the feedback, although that issue with the Chief was just to add some humor to the chapter in that there's such a large amount of Flood in the control room that even Cortana herself-despite being the AI that she is-is so scared out of her wits that she begins to have second thoughts about completing the mission (for now, anyway).


But that would still mean they're screwed. Without the implants, they can't blow up Halo.

  • 05.11.2007 8:16 PM PDT

Posted by: blackke7995
Posted by: Rare_Spartan
Posted by: blackke7995
Great chapter, but shouldn't the Master Chief take the neural implants from Keyes before he leaves? And NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Lutame is a flood!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the feedback, although that issue with the Chief was just to add some humor to the chapter in that there's such a large amount of Flood in the control room that even Cortana herself-despite being the AI that she is-is so scared out of her wits that she begins to have second thoughts about completing the mission (for now, anyway).


But that would still mean they're screwed. Without the implants, they can't blow up Halo.
Exactly. ; ]

  • 05.11.2007 8:33 PM PDT
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* raises hand . . . thinks better of it and puts it back down *

I'll just wait and see.

  • 05.11.2007 8:51 PM PDT
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cool,you should make more episodes.make one including masterchief and the flood.mabe the brutes or assalt on the control room

[Edited on 05.11.2007 9:06 PM PDT]

  • 05.11.2007 9:04 PM PDT
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Make the Grunts fight Tartarus, yeah.

  • 05.11.2007 9:07 PM PDT

Chapter 22: Dead or Alive

"What?", the Grunt sargeant barked, "The demon is here?"
"He is.", 'Rtay replied grimly.
"Ugh, he must've followed us. So, where exactly is he?"
"This grid indicates that the demon is just outside of the control room.", 'Rtay paused for a moment, looked back at the grid and said, "Unggoy, ready your weapons."
"Err...We don't have any.", Pillow answered, as a disappointed 'Rtay sighed.

Standing in the middle of the corridor just outside of the control room, the Master Chief and Cortana contemplated their next action.
"Cortana, we have to get back in there!", the Chief exclaimed.
"Chief, going back in there now would be suicide. There's simply too many Flood for you to handle.", replied Cortana.
"Wanna bet?", the Chief asked, as another cry from Captain Keyes erupted over the COM. With that, the Chief took hold of his Assault Rifle, rushing through the pair of auto-doors ahead. When he entered the control room, it was suprisingly empty. Perhaps Cortana miscalculated.
"Chief, look!", beamed Cortana. Master Chief looked forward, marched up the ramp, and stared at the bolbous creature infront of him. Inside of the hive-looking beast, the Chief could see the face of Keyes himself.
"No Human life-signs detected. The Captain! He's one of them.", Cortana shuddered, "We can't let the Flood get off this ring. You know what he'd expect.....What he'd want us to do."
The Chief nodded, as he clenched his right hand into a fist. His hand lunged forward, and into the enormous Flood form, digging deep into the captain's face. A few seconds later, he reached his fist back out, with the neural implants. He shook the Flood goo off of his hand, then placed the implants into his helmet.
"It's done. I have the code. We should go.", Cortana said softly. "We need to get back to the Pillar of Autumn. Let's go back to the shuttle bay and find a ride."
The Master Chief looked off of the platform, with legions of Flood now pouring into the chamber. He jumped off, heading for the only exit that wasn't infested with Flood. However, once the auto-doors opened, Fisca and Silco stood before him.
"Now!", the Grunt sargeant shouted from behind, as the two Grunts tossed their plasma grenades forward, one of which went a bit too far. The other, however, sat right next to the Chief for a moment. Once it detonated, the Spartan's shields were drained completely.
"Find cover, now!", Cortana barked, as the Chief jumped backward, and into a pit below the platform; a few feet away from him, he spotted a blue, triangular object. As he walked through it, the Master Chief became completely invisible.
"This camoflague won't last forever, Chief, so you better hurry.", Cortana inforced.
"Understood.", Master Chief answered, heading through the auto-doors above the pit.

"Damn, he's gone!", the Grunt sargeant exclaimed, setting down his Fuel Rod Cannon.
"No, Unggoy. We must head to the shuttle bay. He cannot escape!", 'Masta shouted. With that, the entire squad headed backwards, and toward the shuttle bay. A few moments later, once they reached their destination, the troops impatiently waited for the Master Chief to arrive. 'Rtay examined the chamber, with their Phantom being the only aircraft available.
"Oh, no. Look!", the Grunt sargeant said, pointing to the other end of the catwalk; it was him. The crimson-armored Grunt readied his Fuel Rod Cannon, aimed it at the Chief and said, "Eat this!". Once he actually fired however, he missed.
"Now would be a great time to jump!", Cortana shouted through the Master Chief's helmet. The Spartan looked to his left, jumped off of the catwalk, and onto the floor of the shuttle bay. The Covenant troops also jumped. They did not land on the floor, but rather the platform where their Phantom was parked.
"Into the ship, Unggoy. Go! Go!", 'Rtay whispered. The Grunts listened, and headed into the gravlift infront of them. Just then, a buz of static went over 'Rtay's COM. "Bringing reinforcements now, leader."
"What? I didn't-"
'Rtay looked through the enormous window to his right, as another U-shaped dropship entered the cruiser, as well as two Banshees.
"No, you fools!", 'Rtay shouted. Unfortunately, the Banshees landed just next to the Master Chief, and once they did, two dark-clad Elites jumped out of them, giving the demon a chance to escape. And just before the Elites could fire at him, the Spartan hunched into the Banshee, and took off into the night.

"Curses!", 'Masta barked, as the two silver-clad Elites entered the Phantom. "The demon has escaped, Unggoy. We must follow him at once.", 'Rtay panted.
"Already set.", Pillow answered, while hunched in the pilot's seat. The gravlift below their feet died, the Phantom rose, and took after the demon.
"Hey! Where leader 'Latume be?", Moshpit asked, speaking for the first time a long while.
"Oh, damn! That's right. Pillow, head back. We need ter-"
Just then, the Grunt sargeant felt a touch on his left shoulder. He turned backward, and there he was. 'Latume stood before them all with sharp, blood-shot eyes.

  • 05.12.2007 9:29 AM PDT
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Gasp!

I sometimes have bloodshot eyes . . .
It's not pretty, I tell you!

  • 05.12.2007 4:30 PM PDT
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Geez there always something about Saturday nights where i always read these and ridiculously late hours *varying 12:00am to 3:00am* but its usually the last thing i read before i crash. Oh well at least i can always remember what happened nice job with this one rare!

  • 05.12.2007 9:45 PM PDT

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Beethoven Symphony No.5

  • 05.12.2007 9:51 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Zomg amazing!

  • 05.13.2007 8:31 AM PDT
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Posted by: blackke7995
Beethoven Symphony No.5


....uh, yeah.....

  • 05.14.2007 5:18 PM PDT

"Men cry not for themselves, but their comrades."

"A hero need not speak. When he is gone, the world will speak for him."

Nice chapter, Rare! It's great to hear that you're gonna continue this through all the games. Keep 'em comin'!

  • 05.14.2007 7:36 PM PDT