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Subject: Halo: Unggoy Evolved (Fan-Fic)

Thanks for the comments, people. Just as a heads-up, there are only two chapters remaining for Part One of this fan-fic. In the meantime, however, I hope to see some of y'all on the beta today (assuming that the Crackdown issue is fixed in time). Let teh gamez begin.

  • 05.16.2007 12:50 PM PDT
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do you like muffins?

YOU SHOULD REALLY SHOW OF AT THE BETTA!!!!!!!!!!!YOU DESERVE IT AFTER WRITING SO MANY AMAZING FAN-FICS.I ALSO HERE TO ASK YOU TO JOIN DELTA EAGLES.ITS YOUR CHOICE

  • 05.16.2007 8:16 PM PDT

Chapter 23: Condemned

The Grunts stared at 'Latume, amazed that he survived.
"Leader is here!", Moshpit screached.
"But how?", asked a flabbergasted Grunt sargeant.
"Staying behind was my mistake. The parasite has taken me, Unggoy. It is not safe for you to be in my presence.", 'Latume answered calmly.
"If you wanted ter keep us safe, then why the hell did'ja get on our Phantom?", the Grunt sargeant barked. 'Latume paused for a moment, slapped himself square in the face and said, "Oh, good lord."

For hours, the Phantom swiftly glided through Halo's atmosphere, until at last they reached their destination: a vast, canyonous region where the now ruined Pillar of Autumn now lied.
"Unggoy, it's gone!", 'Rtay exclaimed.
"Huh? Whad'ya talkin' 'bout?", asked the Grunt sargeant.
"The demon; he's disappeared from the chart."
"Ah, damn. Well, he's gotta be inside of that ship. Where else? I mean, just look at the rest of this place. It's a dump.", the Grunt sargeant said, pointing at the oval-shaped window next to him.
A few moments later, the Phantom stopped, hovering just next to one of the life-boat airlocks. 'Masta slid the ship's right-side hatch open, as he and the other remaining members of the squad hopped out of the Phantom, and into the Autumn's severely-damaged interior.
"Hey, I recognize this. The place certainly could use some tidying up, though.", Pillow said.
"Ah, don't you start with that again, son.", the Grunt sargeant barked.
The squad continued moving down the cruiser's corridors, still very unaware of where to move next. Every room they entered looked exactly the same, until the troops finally arrived at a chamber that was much different from all of the others: the bridge. Though like the rest of the ship, it was very "black", the bridge provided a central view from above.
"It's quiet...", Silco said, "....too quiet."
"Yeah, that's 'cause we're pretty much the only ones in here.", Fisca replied sarcastically. Just then, however, the sargeant began to hear the same odd sound that he heard before he was attacked by Little Sparky; the crimson-clad Grunt unslung his needler, turned backward, and fired eight pink-colored needles at the Combat form standing behind him. The parasite was flung backward, hitting its head on the far wall.
The Grunt sargeant moved forward, standing right ontop of the infected Elite's corpse. He then hunched down, stood back up, then hunched down again saying, "Yeah, that's right. Sit down, son. I don't want no arguin'."
"Everyone", 'Latume panted, "you must....leave....now!"
"Huh? But I was just gettin' start-" the Grunt sargeant was cut off.
"The parasite....it's....taking control. Get out of here!". The red-armored Grunt nodded at 'Latume's order.
"C'mon, guys. Let's go!", he said, moving his hand towards the doorway as a signal to "follow me". Just before he left the room, the sargeant looked back at the now aching 'Latume and said, "Thanks for everythin'.".
Moshpit was the only one left. However, once he tried to exit through the doorway, a large piece of debris fell from the ceiling, preventing him from leaving the bridge.
"Very bad thing! Me must get out! Me must get away from leader!", Moshpit shouted.
'Latume fell flat onto the ground, going into what looked like a seizure. Moments later, the Elite rose, twisting its now mutated snout toward the Grunt. " 'ello, mate.", said the parasite known as Little Sparky. The combat form lunged forward, swiping its claw across Moshpit's face.

  • 05.19.2007 8:15 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Awesome!

  • 05.19.2007 9:02 PM PDT
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I have only just started reading all of these today, and I'm very impressed by your story!!! I can't wait for the last chapter!

  • 05.19.2007 9:56 PM PDT

"Men cry not for themselves, but their comrades."

"A hero need not speak. When he is gone, the world will speak for him."

Sweet chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

  • 05.20.2007 7:53 PM PDT
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Whoa, is Sparky Australian?

  • 05.20.2007 9:08 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Nice one. Rare. Keep it up....almost done.

  • 05.22.2007 8:43 AM PDT

Thanks again for the comments, people. I really do appreciate 'em. The final chapter of Part 1 will be posted this Saturday, and will most likely be the longest chapter posted (as every closing chapter in the series has been).

Also, a friend of mine made this pretty funny "poster" based on the story. Check it out:

Game of the Year

  • 05.23.2007 12:51 PM PDT
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killer chapter Rare ahaha mosh is dead... never liked him anyways... but NO! only one more chapter theres like uhhh about 3 to 5 more chapters of mine!

  • 05.23.2007 1:17 PM PDT
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Posted by: Rare_Spartan
Thanks again for the comments, people. I really do appreciate 'em. The final chapter of Part 1 will be posted this Saturday, and will most likely be the longest chapter posted (as every closing chapter in the series has been).

Also, a friend of mine made this pretty funny "poster" based on the story. Check it out:

Game of the Year


Lol.

  • 05.23.2007 6:02 PM PDT

Well, here it is, people; the final chapter of Part 1. I'm glad that all of you took the time and patience to read through all o' these. Thanks for readin', and I hope that all of you continue to read these as I continue into Part 2 later this year.
: )

Chapter 24: Time to Skedaddle

After leaving not only 'Latume behind, but Moshpit as well, the squad continued their path down the ship's ruined corridors. As the troops moved onward, they finally reached what looked like a dead end. Infront of them stood a busted blast-door.
"Argh, there's no way through." the Grunt sargeant sighed.
"Wait, Unggoy. I have an idea.", 'Masta said, as the silver-clad Elite stuck his head through the small space in the middle of the door. Just as he was about to peform his next act however, an flood-infected Elite appeared just infront of him. 'Masta moved his head backward, as the door began to open even wider.
"What the hell was that?", Fisca exclaimed.
The blast-door opened, and have a dozen of flood infection and combat forms alike began pouring through the entryway.
"Stand back!", 'Rtay said, as the Sangheili drew his energy sword, slicing through every last one of the monstrosities.
"Ooh, nice one.", Silco said, giving 'Rtay a wink. The squad then continued onward, stepping over the corpses of both Elites and Humans. Approximately six minutes later, the troops entered a suprisingly silver-coated hallway. What wasn't too suprising, however, were the number of dead Covenant soldiers lying on the floor. Sitting right next to Pillow were two dead Lekgolo (Hunters).
"Whoever performed this act should be somewhere down that corridor.", 'Rtay said, pointing towards the entryway near the far left side of the room.
"How can ya tell?", the Grunt sargeant asked, "Can you smell 'im out or somethin'?"
"No.", 'Rtay replied, "There are foot prints just next to the corpse."
"Oh.", the Grunt sargeant said, now feeling a little embarrassed. The crew followed the orange-colored foot prints until they reached yet another blast door. Thankfully, this one was in perfect condition; the six of them head through, entering one of the Autumn's largest chambers. Alarms were chattering above their heads, due to the high temperatures.
"Man, is it hot in here or what?", Pillow asked rhetorically, as a large rectangle above them began to slide out of the wall, revealing a filterlike opening. Pillow moved several feet to the side, looked back up, and saw the demon himself doing his dirty work.
"Guys, look!", Pillow exclaimed. The Master Chief took hold of a fragmentation grenade, tossed it into the opening, and caused a large amount of debris to spew outward. The ceiling above them all began to crumble.
"Damn, we're too late! He's already tryin' to set off the bomb.", the Grunt sargeant said frustratingly.
"And that is why we cannot remain here any longer. Quickly, we must find a vessel that will help us escape!", 'Masta exclaimed.
"And how do y'all expect us to find one?", the Grunt sargeant asked, his temper boiling.
"Well," 'Rtay said, "during the battle above the ring, I remember visiting the launch bay near the upper end of the ship. If we could just simply find a service lift to guide us there, we may have a chance of survival. Follow me!"

Three minutes later, the squad entered a small chamber, with the heat beginning to increase. They each moved forward, and entered the elevator. A few moments later, the blast-doors infront of them closed tightly, and the elevator took off. Thirty seconds later, the elevator stopped, and the passageway infront of them led to a group of warthogs, with six parked on the ends of each side of the corridor.
"You go on, Unggoy. 'Masta and I shall remain here.", 'Rtay said, as the four Grunts stepped out of the service lift.
"What? Yer stayin' here?", the Grunt sargeant asked.
"Incase the demon tries to make his way up here, we'll buy you some time. You haven't much time now. Move!"
"Thank you.", the Grunt sargeant said softly, as the service lift headed downward. As the lift descended, he heard the words, "Good luck.", coming from the two silver-clad Elites.
"Well, nice knowin' them. They're gonna get their asses chewed up.", Silco said.
"Put a sock in it, soldier. Now, we just need to find somethin' that'll get us to the launch bay in time.", the Grunt sargeant said.
"How about that?", Pillow asked, pointing toward the Warthog parked left of the Grunt sargeant.
"But there's only three seats.", Fisca said, "We can't fit all four of us in there."
"Nonsense.", the Grunt sargeant corrected, "Fisca, you'll sit next ter me. Pillow, you sit on Fisca's lap."
"Ah, son of a-"
"And Silco, you'll take that gun turret.", the sargeanted interupted Fisca. Eventually, all of them were seated, and the jeep took off, mowing down legions of Flood strolling the highway. With not even time to describe all of the details of their drive, I'll just break it down into these two elements: a restroom break and one broken needler.

Finally, after nearly ten minutes of driving, the squad finally reached their destination, with only three minutes to spare. The Grunts leaped out of the Warthog, running as fast as they could down a long, Flood-infested passageway. With Elites being thrashed together and Jackles being used as chew-toys, there was little time for the Flood to attack the Grunt sargeant and his men. The troops made it to the end of the passageway, and climbed up the steep ramp leading into the black-coated, crowlike UNSC Longsword. Once each of them entered the ship, Pillow threw himself into the pilot's seat, trying to understand the controls.
"Hurry up, Pillow! We need ter get out of here, now!", the Grunt sargeant barked.
"OK, ok. Just hold on a sec.", Pillow said, with sweat running down his face, "Got it."
With only one minute left, the engines of the Longsword roared, and the ship took off, leaving the Autumn behind. Fifty seconds later, the ship was out of the Halo's atmosphere, and now rested on the space of Threshhold.

The Master Chief's Warthog rumbled down the streetlike pavement of the Autumn, until he received a message from Cortana.
"Chief! The ship! It's gone!", Cortana cried.
"What? What do you-"
"The longsword! It's gone. We were too late...."
The Master Chief stopped the Warthog, looked from side to side, then placed his head on the steering wheel.
"Oh, son of a bit-"
Exactly one second later, the Pillar of Autumn began to burst into a one, orange flower of fire and debris. Afterward, one large chunk of the ring chipped off, colliding into another section of the ring. Halo was destroyed.

The Grunts looked through the window on the bridge of the Longsword, watching the ring fall apart. As they watched this, they remembered each of the Covenant troops that gave their lives during those last few days: 'Latume, Moshpit, 'Rtay and 'Masta, and even Hackle, whom they've known for years, were gone. Once they got that out of their heads, however, Pillow turned toward the Grunt sargeant and asked, "So, how are we gonna get home?"

End of Part One

[Edited on 05.26.2007 4:48 PM PDT]

  • 05.26.2007 4:44 PM PDT
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But they'll be back . . .

Cool. Really good Fan fic.

Part 2?

  • 05.26.2007 5:49 PM PDT

Posted by: Sludgee
Part 2?
Indeed.

[Edited on 05.26.2007 5:57 PM PDT]

  • 05.26.2007 5:56 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Teh awesome!

  • 05.26.2007 6:52 PM PDT

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Truth and Reconciliation , Halo Infinities , Council of the Rising

HOLY CRAP THAT WAS THE BEST EVER. I DON'T KNOW I'M WRITING THIS IN CAPS LOCK, ( I normally never do this, but since this fanfic was so good..) BUT MAYBE BECAUSE IT'S SO GOOD. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE PART 2 AND THAT PICTURE WAS AWEXOME.

  • 05.27.2007 11:35 AM PDT
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awesome ending to the chaper...but did you HAVE to kill the MC, lol? Funny pic also. Can't wait for Part 2!

  • 05.27.2007 6:26 PM PDT
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The end of this fanfic marks the end of an era.

But fortunately, there will be a part 2.

  • 05.27.2007 6:43 PM PDT

Posted by: Sdrawkcab Eman
The end of this fanfic marks the end of an era.

But fortunately, there will be a part 2.
Knaht uoy yrev hcum! ( :

  • 05.27.2007 9:15 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Rare, as much as I like your stories, what you are doing to MC is not funny.

Anyway, It must be a relief that you finished, eh?

[Edited on 05.28.2007 4:16 PM PDT]

  • 05.28.2007 4:15 PM PDT

Posted by: Sergeant Keslo
Rare, as much as I like your stories, what you are doing to MC is not funny.
In what sense? That his death/revival is being overdone, or that what is happening to him is marked as cruel and unusual punishment?

  • 05.28.2007 4:25 PM PDT

That was a good chapter Rare. Though Sergant Kelso you have to think that the MC is not going to be around forever.

  • 06.01.2007 6:11 AM PDT

Posted by: HaIoChick4Ever
Teh awesome!

  • 06.01.2007 11:21 AM PDT

Thanks for readin', everybody! I'm glad to hear that y'all enjoyed the final chapter. Either tomorrow or next Saturday, I'll announce as to when I'll start posting chapters for Part 2 (which may or may not be posted in this thread).

  • 06.01.2007 1:13 PM PDT