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Subject: Halo: Unggoy Evolved (Fan-Fic)

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Nice one!

  • 12.23.2006 7:06 PM PDT
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Intersting chapter, keep it up.

  • 12.23.2006 7:06 PM PDT
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Forget Pillow, what the heck's Piggyback doin' there, wherever 'there' is?

  • 12.23.2006 9:32 PM PDT
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Ah, more mystery! Keep it up Rare.

  • 12.25.2006 7:04 PM PDT
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Happy New-Year, everyone! I hope y'all have a good New-Years eve:

Chapter 4: Finished Camping

Five minutes passed, and with the demon still firing at their position, the Grunt sargeant and his crew of three held still behind a large, metal crate in the back end of the Cryochamber.
"So...any ideas?", asked Hackle, crouching behind the right-hand side of the crate.
"Well,", the Grunt sargeant sighed, "we could make a run for it. I mean, it's only one guy. How quick can he be?"
The others immeaditely nodded with agreement. "Alright, now when I so go....you.....Go!!", exclaimed the Grunt sargeant, as he and his three unggoy quickly ran out of their hiding spot and towards the sliding doors to their left.
Just then, however, the armored figure standing at the high-point of the chamber reached into one of his straps and immeaditely pulled out a glowing, blue-colored object, with its flame sizzling in his right hand; it was a grenade. The barbarian quickly threw object towards the sliding doors, barely missing the four grunts.
"Whew....That was a close one! What was that thing?", asked Fisca, taking a deep breath. The four unggoy were now standing inside of a long, narrow hallway, with a pair of sliding doors at the end of each side.
A few seconds later, the gold-armored Elite that they met earlier crossed through the sliding doors behind them, with a sigh of relief on his face.
"We must...move...quickly! The demon is on his way! Hurry!", exclaimed the Elite, catching his breath.
It was not long 'till the crew of five reached the end of the left-hand side of the hallway, and through the sliding doors. They were now standing in a fairly small chamber, with a long, rectangular window-piece on the left side.
Just then, the entire chamber began to rapidly shake below their feet. "Wh-wh-what was th-that?", Silco stuttered by the rumbling of the cruiser. "It's probably just reinformants....right?", the Grunt sargeant asked the Elite.
"Hmmm....No, these or no reinforcements! We must flee this ship, immeaditely!", exclaimed the golden-armored commander. The four grunts nodded, as the five of them made an exit from the small chamber, and towards the life pods.

  • 12.30.2006 5:14 PM PDT
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Nice, can't wait to see the next one.

  • 12.30.2006 5:52 PM PDT
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Nice Chapter Rare! Keep up the great work!

  • 12.30.2006 7:54 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Posted by: the 99th arbiter
Nice Chapter Rare! Keep up the great work!

  • 12.31.2006 11:06 AM PDT

Posted by: HaIoChick4Ever
Posted by: the 99th arbiter
Nice Chapter Rare! Keep up the great work!

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Thanks for the feedback, everybody. I hope y'all had a fun, safe New Year's eve. As usual, the next chapter will be posted on Saturday.

[Edited on 1/2/2007]

  • 01.02.2007 10:27 PM PDT
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Yay!

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Chapter 5: Lifeboats Anyone?

With a clear sign of distress coming from the squad, the golden-armored Elite and the four Grunts aiding him headed towards the end passage, and towards the Autumn's lifeboats.
"Ugh...How much longer 'till we get there?", the Grunt sargeant moaned, with his short legs quickly beggining to feel tired.
"We're nearly there, Unggoy; Just continue moving forward!", the Elite exclaimed. Finally, the five reached the end of the empty hallway, as the automatic doors slid open, with beams of both purple and blue soaring just past them.
"Hey, watch where you're aiming that thing, buddy!", Silco said, raising a fist at the Sangheili. standing at the top of the staircase infront of them. The small squad peaked just through the sliding doors, and noticed two marines firing at the Elite (as well as a few Unggoy, who stood just to his sides) above the staircase. In between the two soldiers however stood their sargeant; He was black, with a small cap on his head and a cigar in his mouth.
"Go on, men-Up those stairs, Go! Go! Go!", shouted the sargeant. However, it was only a matter of seconds until the Elite tossed a plasma grenade of the same type that the demon used, and stuck it onto the sargeant's head.
"What the-"
The explosion tossed the sargeant to the other end of the wall, as he lie dead against the silver wall. "Now, Unggoy! Move, quickly!", ordered the commanding Elite, as he and the four Grunts ran straight through the sliding doors, up the stairs, and joined their fellow, blue-armored soldier.
"Commander...", said the Elite, nodding to the other, "Where might be your destination?"
"We're searching for the lifeboat chamber; Can you assist us in any way, warrior?", asked the commander.
"Simple, commander. The chamber is just ahead. Just make sure to-"
The Elite was immeaditely knocked on the back of his head. The soldier slowly fell to the floor, revealing the green-armored demon once again; They stared at him for a few seconds, then quickly retreated to the next chamber ahead. The demon chased after them, but the commanding Elite, as fast as he could, aproached a small console next to chamber's opening. He simply pressed a small button, with two glass doors rising upward, preventing the barbarian from getting any closer.
".....Now, into the lifeboat! Now!", shouted the commander. He and the four Grunts turned to their left, as they entered the lifeboat airlock, and into the pod itsel; the doors attached to the pod immeaditely shut, as the five of them launched out of the Autumn's structure, and into space.

  • 01.06.2007 7:11 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

lol, that arrogant grunt from the last story, good job Rare, btw, tell your buddies from the last game we played to stop making fun of the cheese.

  • 01.06.2007 7:52 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

That's was good! Keep it up! :D

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Interesting, keep them coming.

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Thanks again for the feedback, people! As always, the next chapter will be here on Saturday.

  • 01.10.2007 1:08 PM PDT
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Sweet!

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Chapter 6: Sneaky Sneaky

Meanwhile, inside of the large banana-shaped rock, Pillow and Piggyback were enjoying a nice cup of salt water (which was found on the banks of a nearby river).
"Nice play ya got here. How long have you lived here?", Pillow asked, setting his stone cup ontop of a table made entirely out of, you guessed it, rocks.
"Nine months, to be precise. However, i've been on this ring for nearly a year!", replied Piggyback. " 'Ring'?", asked Pillow.
"Indeed", continued Piggyback, "You see, when I first arrived, the place was deserted from what I could see. It was not until a month later when I traveled a large majority of this place. Clearly, I was the only creature on this ring. That is of course until you arrived. Anyway, after several months living of living in this rock, I studied the outline of this place. My overall assumption boiled down to this: the planet is ring-shaped; quite possibly one of the sacred rings that the Prophets have spoken of."
"And what led you to believe that?", Pillow said sarcastically. "It's just simply a hunch so far.", replied Piggyback.
Just then, a loud bursting of flames came outside. The two Grunts quickly ran outside, and as they looked into the blue sky, a lifeboat came crashing down a few feet away from their position.
The two of them crawled back into the crescent-shaped stone, and just barely peaked outside. A few moments later, two UNSC marines walked outside of the pod-shaped aircraft, stretching their arms out.
"Woo! We made it.", the marine said.
Suddenly, a small blue flame flew straight onto the marine's head. "Dude, what's that on your head?", asked the marine. "Huh? What are you talkin' abo-"
The grenade exploded, and the marine flew high into the air and then fell onto the grassy terrain, dead. The explosion also caused the other marine to fly backward, and into the back of the pod, knocking his head on the wall. The soldier was now unconscious.
"Whoah, nice one Piggy! Where'd you get those?", exclaimed Pillow.
"Luckily, these plasma grenades were still in my possession when I landed here.", Piggyback said. Just then, another lifeboat came crashing down near their position. Three seconds later, the door of the pod busted down, and the two Unggoy were ready for any enemy that came their way......just as long as they still had some plasma grenades.

  • 01.13.2007 5:43 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Haha! I loved the grenade part. That's hilarious! Nice one, keep it up!! :D

  • 01.13.2007 6:00 PM PDT
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Hah, nice one. Keep it up.

  • 01.13.2007 6:44 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy


Nice.....but no more marine deaths!!

  • 01.14.2007 10:27 AM PDT
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awesome chapter keep it up

  • 01.15.2007 7:44 AM PDT
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Can't wait for the next chapter I'm gunna guess that Johnson is still alive and is gunna be pissed at whoever threw that stickie!

  • 01.15.2007 10:17 AM PDT