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Subject: Halo: Unggoy Evolved (Fan-Fic)
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Sorry I haven't posted in a while. The last two chapters were great, though! Keep 'em coming!

  • 01.16.2007 8:12 PM PDT
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This thread has offically become a flaming monkey

  • 01.16.2007 9:01 PM PDT
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Posted by: the 99th arbiter
Sorry I haven't posted in a while. The last two chapters were great, though! Keep 'em coming!
It's cool, G. Hopefully, i'll be able to get the next chapter out this Saturday. Due to the recent (frozen rain) storm over here, the power's been goin' out all over the neighborhood.

  • 01.17.2007 2:59 PM PDT
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Chapter 7: Family Reunion

With yet another lifeboat on the ground, the two Grunts waited patiently for the passengers to reveal themselves.
It was only until a few seconds later when five Covenant troops left the damaged pod; They turned to be the remaining members of Pillow's crew, along with the (Elite) commander.
"Sarge, is that you?!", Pillow asked, stepping closer toward the pod. "Hey, look! It's Pillow!", Fisca clearly pointed out. "Ah, great.", Hackle said sarcastically, as he always found Pillow to be more of a noosense than an actual squad member, despite his piloting skills.
"Pillow, how in the world didja get here?", the Grunt sargeant asked.
"To tell ya the truth, I don't really know. All I remember is leaving the Hunters' planet in that Phantom, and then.....I just woke up here. What about you guys?", Pillow said.
"Same here," replied Hackle, "although I do remember Piggyback. That little bastard deceived us! The next time I see him, i'm gonna strangle him so hard, his ancestors will be feelin' it to."
While eavesdropping within the crescent-shaped rock, the fiendish Grunt gulped slightly at the mere thought of Hackle's threat.
"Well, technically, " Pillow said, trying to get off the subject of Piggyback in the best manner possible, "it was not the same for you guys, since you just got here; I've been here for days!"
"Argh, you know what I mean!", exclaimed Hackle with extreme frustration.
"Where did you guys end up, anyway?", Pillow asked.
"I dunno, some sort of alien spacecraft. From what this guy here says," the Grunt sargeant replied, pointing (upward) at the golden-armored Elite "the Covenant has some sort of grudge against these aliens."
"Unggoy, your conversation with one another is most confusing! Nonetheless, we are at war with the humans, and I will not allow this pathetic race to resume living!", the Elite said. Just then, however, a large bulky vehicle emerged from a nearby hill. The four-wheeled beast drove down the grassy terrain and caught the commander by suprise, running straight over him.

[Edited on 1/21/2007]

  • 01.20.2007 6:34 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Keep it up, good job. Keep writing till I find some less corny encouragements and replies.

  • 01.20.2007 7:18 PM PDT

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Truth and Reconciliation , Halo Infinities , Council of the Rising

Hi everyone, this is one of my first posts, so yeah. I just want to say that Rare makes the best fanfic ever! keep it up.

  • 01.20.2007 10:01 PM PDT
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Posted by: blackke7995
Hi everyone, this is one of my first posts, so yeah. I just want to say that Rare makes the best fanfic ever! keep it up.
You've been registered since August, and you just started posting?!
Thanks for the feedback, by the way.

  • 01.20.2007 11:29 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Good one! Keep it up! Lawlelitegotownt :P

  • 01.21.2007 8:21 AM PDT

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Posted by: Rare Spartan
Posted by: blackke7995
Hi everyone, this is one of my first posts, so yeah. I just want to say that Rare makes the best fanfic ever! keep it up.
You've been registered since August, and you just started posting?!
Thanks for the feedback, by the way.

Oh yeah, about that, you see, i'm actually not really a member, my friend let me use his account so that I can interact in the forums. Actually, that was my first post. My friend registered a long time ago. Sorry I didn't mention that before.

  • 01.21.2007 5:16 PM PDT
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Nice, as I keep saying, keep it up, it's a good story.

  • 01.21.2007 7:59 PM PDT

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Posted by: KidWitPotential
ya know, im proud to be an inverted player, its like we're a rare breed or something


Do NOT send me Recruitment Letters, doing so will get you blocked faster than you can say "Huh?"

hey Rare finally glad to catch up on the fan-fics great job on sticking with the same characters

  • 01.22.2007 2:16 PM PDT
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Awesome!

  • 01.22.2007 6:27 PM PDT
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Thanks, everybody. I'm glad that this fic still interests you people. Anyway, seeing as how i'm going with my dad on one of his business trips this weekend (not so much for the business, more for the trip itself. lol), I'm not sure if i'll be able to get the next chapter in this week. Expect Ch. 8 to arrive next weekend; have a good one, people!

  • 01.25.2007 8:55 PM PDT

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Darn, that's a long time. Oh well, it be worth it.

  • 01.26.2007 7:23 AM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

In the mean time I will just find some way to destroy your clan =F3AR= in pacticular.

  • 01.26.2007 8:11 PM PDT

for the "Covenant" and for the "Great Journey"
I like NARUTO
Creeping in my Soul
Naruto
Bionicle
Hey u mess wit Sludgee u mess wit Me got it!!!!
MY sorrow

hey rare spartan. im new to this whole thing. so what are your posts

  • 01.26.2007 8:32 PM PDT
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I love how I've just read all your articles or "chapters" before. I've seem them before, you didn't make this. This is COPYRIGHT. Thats agaisnt the law, not only just forum rules. I think sombody is busted...

  • 01.26.2007 9:03 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Posted by: RED FOXX34
I love how I've just read all your articles or "chapters" before. I've seem them before, you didn't make this. This is COPYRIGHT. Thats agaisnt the law, not only just forum rules. I think sombody is busted...


You mean his stories? or are you bluffing? I don't think so as I was one of the first readers of all the stories he wrote. Plus if you've "Seen" them, why not show us the mighty link to where you read it.

[Edited on 1/28/2007]

  • 01.28.2007 7:31 PM PDT
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Posted by: RED FOXX34
I love how I've just read all your articles or "chapters" before. I've seem them before, you didn't make this. This is COPYRIGHT. Thats agaisnt the law, not only just forum rules. I think sombody is busted...
I'm sorry, but I have not copied these chapters from any other site or board. These stories were written completely as my own work, and as Keslo said, please give me a link to where you read this story before.

[Edited on 1/29/2007]

  • 01.29.2007 1:46 PM PDT

Join the best group of all time Last Refuge!

Posted by: KidWitPotential
ya know, im proud to be an inverted player, its like we're a rare breed or something


Do NOT send me Recruitment Letters, doing so will get you blocked faster than you can say "Huh?"

honestly if anything someone most likley copied Rare not the other way around.

  • 01.29.2007 2:07 PM PDT
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Things are startin' to get pretty confusing, now. Now the guy claims that he has no knowledge of even posting in this thread. Ah well, he does not seem to be causing any real trouble. Thanks for your patience, people; there'll be a new chapter this saturday. Now that all five of the Grunts have been reunited, the plot's now going to move toward how exactly they ended up the way they did when this story began.

[Edited on 1/29/2007]

  • 01.29.2007 8:10 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
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Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

whoa, like they all died in the explosion?

  • 01.30.2007 12:25 PM PDT

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MUST READ CHAPTER...oh and Rare, didn't you have a fanfic about the activation of Halo? I liked that one. I didn't find it in your sig.

[Edited on 2/1/2007]

  • 01.30.2007 4:59 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Maybe the next story will be "Halo: Return of Unggoy, or Halo: Revenge of Unggoy"

  • 01.31.2007 5:52 PM PDT