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Subject: Halo: Unggoy Evolved (Fan-Fic)
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Wow. I never remember posting that. It was my probally my frined who spent the night and thought it was funny just like how he hacked my myspace that night. Anywayz im sorry for his post and will make sure he doesnt get on the PC again.

  • 01.31.2007 6:52 PM PDT
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Rare I like this alot. If anyone wnats another covie fanfic search for FanFic: The Forgotten

  • 01.31.2007 7:14 PM PDT
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Posted by: RED FOXX34
Wow. I never remember posting that. It was my probally my frined who spent the night and thought it was funny just like how he hacked my myspace that night. Anywayz im sorry for his post and will make sure he doesnt get on the PC again.
It's cool, dawg!

Thanks for the feedback, Pr3dator. I'll be sure to check out the fan-fic you mentioned, soon.

[Edited on 1/31/2007]

  • 01.31.2007 8:14 PM PDT

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Posted by: RED FOXX34
Wow. I never remember posting that. It was my probally my frined who spent the night and thought it was funny just like how he hacked my myspace that night. Anywayz im sorry for his post and will make sure he doesnt get on the PC again.

For a second I thought you said that. lol

  • 01.31.2007 10:08 PM PDT
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Bring back something like Little Sparky, that was funny!

  • 02.01.2007 6:14 PM PDT
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Chapter 8: Retreat

The Grunts screamed and yelped as two more of those bulky vehicles stormed the field. The three Warthogs then began to form a large circle around the grassy terrain, while taunting the six aliens (excluding Piggyback, as he remained inside of his stone-carved shelter).
Quickly, the Grunt sargeant and his men walked toward their fallen (Elite) comrade, who had been run over by one of the monstrous machines.
"Hey, buddy. You gonna be alright?", the sargeant asked. "Well...I'm not quite dead! Actually, I think I can make it."
Just as the Elite commander began to stand back on his two feet, he was immeaditely shot down by a turret attached to the back of the circling Warthog.
"Oh, damn! We've lost 'im!", exclaimed the Grunt sargeant, feeling more annoyed than scared of the vehicles. "Actually, I think i'll be able to pull through.", the commander replied from behind the crew.
Once again, the golden-armored Elite got back on his feet, pulled out a plasma grenade, and just as he was about to throw it, the same turret shot him down with the plasma grenade now sitting right on top of him.
"Everybody, retreat!", shouted the Grunt sargeant. The crew of five quickly ran out of the hypnotic circle just in time; when the blue flame of the grenade erupted, it did not only send the commander flying high into the air, but the Warthogs were also flipped backward (due to them being so close). With that, the marines were crushed under the weight of the massive vehicle.
"Wow....That sure was somethin'.", Silco chuckled, staring back at the remains. "Yeah, but look on the bright side; atleast we've got a nice, new vehicle to use.", said the Grunt sargeant, trying to make the best of the situation.
"What are you talking about, sir? There's no way we can lift that thing!", exclaimed Hackle, pointing toward one of the Warthogs.
Without hesitation, Pillow tossed one of his (several) plasma grenades to the back of the Warthog. As soon as the grenade exploded, the massive vehicle was flipped over again, but this time, into its proper position. The other three Unggoy stared in astonishment, realizing that Pillow himself pulled this one off.
"Whoah, nice one Pillow!", exclaimed Fisca cheerfully.
"Yes, excellent work, Pillow.", the Grunt sargeant replied.
Each of the Unggoy stepped into the Warthog. The Grunt sargeant sat in the front, finding the controls to this vehicle being suprisingly simple. Silco sat next to him, with Fisca sitting in the back, equipped with a fairly large-sized turret. Hackle, however, walked toward of the marine lifeboats, and examined some of the supplies- possibly something that he could find useful. In the end however, all he took were a few frag grenades and what looked to be some type of Laptop (which he kept inside of a patch that sat on his back).
After the inventor gathered the marines' supplies, he and Pillow flipped the other of the three Warthogs over (using the same technique Pillow used to get it back up and running); Hackle sat in the driver's seat, with Pillow on the back.
Several minutes later, the two jeeps rode just out of the field. The Warthogs bumped and hopped over a pair of sharp rocks on the edge of a mountain side, soon leading into a dark tunnel. However, this tunnel was not an ordinary one. The walls were made of metal, with bright, blue lights attached to the ceiling; somebody built this tunnel, although the five Grunts could really care less.

Meanwhile, back on the field, the other remaining Grunt finally decided to go outside. "Ah, finally. The battle must be over by now!", Piggyback said, as he slowly crept outside of his stone-carved house. He soon found that he was alone once again, realizing that he may be spending the rest of his days on this ring.

[Edited on 2/4/2007]

  • 02.03.2007 6:01 PM PDT

At last there's more. Another great chapter!

  • 02.03.2007 8:01 PM PDT
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Cool, grunts riding on warthogs, very cool and interesting, keep the chapters coming.

  • 02.03.2007 10:23 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

That was awesome!

  • 02.03.2007 11:03 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Nice....but I really hate Marine Deaths.

  • 02.04.2007 9:38 AM PDT

Join the best group of all time Last Refuge!

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ya know, im proud to be an inverted player, its like we're a rare breed or something


Do NOT send me Recruitment Letters, doing so will get you blocked faster than you can say "Huh?"

nice work

  • 02.04.2007 11:12 AM PDT

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Great chapter! Let me guess, the tunnels were from the second level of halo. If I were the Grunts, I wouldn't use warthogs that were damaged twice by grenades. But the warthogs were probably the invincible ones from halo 1, right? (Grunts can drive warthogs?! cool.)

[Edited on 2/4/2007]

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Thanks again for the feedback, everybody! As always, there will be a new chapter on Saturday. In this next one, the squad has yet another confrontation with "the demon".

  • 02.08.2007 1:14 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

They better not do anything to harm the demon.

  • 02.08.2007 2:47 PM PDT

~Silent Avenger~

I will stand by and hold on to the only thing I know true The Assassins

Hey Rare, haven't read one of your fan-fics in a very long time. You probably don't even remember me lol. Anyways nice work on this fan-fic, took a while to read through it all but well worth the time. Keep up your great work.

  • 02.08.2007 6:40 PM PDT
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Posted by: Silent Avenger
Hey Rare, haven't read one of your fan-fics in a very long time. You probably don't even remember me lol. Anyways nice work on this fan-fic, took a while to read through it all but well worth the time. Keep up your great work.
Yeah, I remember you. Glad to hear from you again, man!

[Edited on 2/8/2007]

  • 02.08.2007 7:39 PM PDT
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Hey Rare! I keep trying to remind myself to read your fan-fic, but I just can't get off my 360. Great chapters Rare! Keep 'em coming!

  • 02.10.2007 4:17 PM PDT
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Heh, heh, I understand.

Here's this week's chapter, everybody. Enjoy:

Chapter 9: The Bridge

With their newly-acquired Warthogs, the Grunt squad of five continued their trip through a dimly-lit tunnel. They were apparently the only Covenant inside of the tunnel- That is until they reached a checkpoint within the middle of the passage.
Light slowly crept in as they reached the checkpoint. White lights were attached to the walls. There was also a small passage in the center with a bright, blue bridge leading to the next section of the tunnel.
The bridge was glassy-looking, and could only be activated (or deactivated) by accessing the holo-panel on the right side of the chamber (which stood on the edge of a long, but thin outcropping.
In just a matter of seconds, the five Grunts abandoned the seats to their Warthog(s), where they joined a number of Covenant troops on the right side of the wide tunnel; the troops were all hiding between a set of small pillars close to a ramp that lead towards the outcropping (and the holopanel).
The squad was soon accompanied by a fellow Unggoy in yellow clad armor. "Demon coming, grunty brother! We stay here in dark hiding spot. You good?", the Grunt asked. "Oh damn, not that guy again! C'mon, fellas. Follow me!", the crimson-armored sargeant exclaimed.
The Grunt sargeant moved his bulky (index) finger to the side, ordering his four men to follow him up towards the ramp. The Grunts nodded, as they followed their commander up the ramp. However, so did the yellow-armored soldier (who was not even part of the squad).
From the top of the outcropping, the six Grunts peared over, where the bridge hovered above a cloud of grey myst, and over on the other side of the tunnel, the demon known as the 'Master Chief' was heading toward the glasslike structure. Just as he was about to drive onto the bridge, he spotted a number of Covenant forces hiding beneath the pillars on the opposite side of the passage.
The Master Chief quickly left the front of his vehilce, along with two UNSC marines, as they snuck behind one of the short pillars. The Elite standing infront of the Chief growled, and began firing what seemed like endless bursts of plasma from his rifle. However, he was no match for this faceless monstrosity. The green-armored soldier tore through the Elite's shields with the piercing bullets of his Assault Rifle.
Once all of the Covenant forces were eliminated on the right side of the passage, the Master Chief and his two marines went back into their Warthog, and drove onto the brightly-lit bridge.
"Dear God, that thing's a monster; We don't stand a chance!", exclaimed Hackle. "Pull yerself together, Hackle. We can take 'im.", the Grunt sargeant ordered, though he quickly sighed afterward.
"Hey, what's this button do?", Pillow asked, being the curious Grunt that he was. However, he did not hesitate. The black-armored Unggoy clicked the left button on the holopanel. With that, the blue brightness of the bridge slowly dimmed away, sending the Master Chief and his men into a cloud of myst.
Witnessing this, the four other Grunts (excluding the yellow-armored one, of course) looked over at Pillow. He had obviously done something right, but they were not quite sure what it was.
The pilot-skilled Grunt began to smile, turned over to his squadmates, and said, "Yahoo! I'm a role, today!"

  • 02.10.2007 8:02 PM PDT

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Nice chapter. I knew that it was the same thing as the level halo where you're in the tunnel (except for the part about the MC falling down the light bridge.

  • 02.10.2007 10:36 PM PDT
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Interesting chapter, I look forward to seeing on how the MC will come back, as well as what will happen to the grunts.

  • 02.10.2007 11:38 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Haha. That was good, keep it up!

  • 02.11.2007 10:28 AM PDT

Posted by: HaIoChick4Ever
Haha. That was good, keep it up!

  • 02.11.2007 3:20 PM PDT
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That was sweet! When the Chief gets back hes gunna be pisssed!

  • 02.11.2007 3:55 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Nooo!!! This is horrible.....lol, the famous "What does this button do?"

  • 02.12.2007 12:46 PM PDT

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It reminds me of this really old cartoon show Dexter's Laboratory where some girl always says "What does this button do?"

  • 02.12.2007 1:28 PM PDT