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Subject: Halo: Unggoy Evolved (Fan-Fic)

~Silent Avenger~

I will stand by and hold on to the only thing I know true The Assassins

Hey, nice work Rare! Keep it up I'll be looking forard to your next chapter.

  • 02.13.2007 7:40 AM PDT
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great job you inspired my I might write my own ohh I have sitch bungie is gonna kick my group you guys seem like allies so pppplllleeeeaaaasssweeee join Delta Eagles by the way rare where do you come up with this and Im with Kelso enough UNSC deaths please how aboat freindly fire

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  • 02.13.2007 5:41 PM PDT
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Nice job rare, thats all i need to say

  • 02.13.2007 6:09 PM PDT
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Semper Fi
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The GRAND poll/thread "We want online co-op for Halo 3": http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=8204108

Support it and you will support online co-op for Halo 3!


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  • 02.13.2007 6:53 PM PDT
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yes it will

  • 02.13.2007 7:56 PM PDT
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Poor Chief. Keep writing Rare!

  • 02.14.2007 8:43 PM PDT
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Keep it up! I might just post my story in the public forum, this is inspiring!

  • 02.15.2007 5:57 PM PDT
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Posted by: Artemis013
Keep it up! I might just post my story in the public forum, this is inspiring!
I apreciate that. Good luck with your fan-fic, as well.

Thanks (once again) for the comments, everybody. Of course, the next chapter will be here on Saturday; a bit more of info on this new (Grunt) companion will be revealed, this week.

  • 02.15.2007 8:14 PM PDT

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Cool a new Grunt. I like Grunts.

  • 02.16.2007 4:50 PM PDT

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*hey rare. could you just check out my fan-fic? its probably crap compared to yours, but just search my name. thanks anyway./*

[Edited on 2/19/2007]

  • 02.17.2007 2:19 PM PDT
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Sure thing, man. : )

Chapter 10: Dowski

After finally ridding themselves of the barbaric Master Chief, the five-membered Grunt squad continued their travels around the mysterious ring world. Pillow had reactivated the bridge by using the holo-panel. The Grunts then moved to the right end of the outcropping, down the ramp, and back on the trail (where their Warthogs had been parked).
"Wait, wait, grunty brothers! Take me! Take me!", shouted the (obnoxious) yellow-armored Unggoy. "State yer name, son.", the Grunt sargeant ordered as he started the engine of his Warthog.
"Moshpit, oh mighty veteran!", the Grunt answered, who merely guessed the rank of the Grunt sargeant by the red coding of his armor.
"Do you have any specialized combat skills? My guess would be 'no', due to yer yella armor. O' course back then, yella was today's white. Heh, heh.", the Grunt sargeant said.
"C'mon, sarge! We could use a decoy.", said Silco, who sat in the passenger's seat of the sargeant's Warthog.
"Nah, we've got enough of those already! I'm sure we'll be able to find some use for 'im, though.....Hop in, Moshpit!", the red-armored Grunt ordered. Moshpit nodded, walked forward and sat in the passenger's seat (aka Silco's lap).
"Argh, get off of me!", Silco shouted, as he pushed Moshpit off of the seat and onto the hard, stone floor. The Grunt sargeant slapped his face and said, "The other Warthog, Moshpit."
Moshpit nodded once again, walked behind the sargeant's Warthog, and into the passenger's seat of Hackle's.

The Grunts eventually found a way out of the tunnel. However, it was not until several hours later when they finally found another form of life. The squad soon found themselves lost inside of a mucky grotto, and tied to a tree was a part of the Pillar of Autumn's command crew.
The Grunts hit the breaks on their bulky vehicles, left them, and aproached the female. The only sign of of bear skin that could be seen was her face, which was as pale as snow.
"Now who is this here?", the Grunt sargeant asked, as he aproached the Ensign. "Let me out of here!", the woman cried when suddenly, several blue-armored Elites entered the scene.
The Elites untied the woman, grabbed her by the arms, and took her-as well as the Grunts (though it was more than an invitation for them)- aboard their dropship. The [Pillar of Autumn] crew member spoke to the Covenant troops about the position of the rest of the command crew- the same crew that tied her to a tree (due to her acts of cowardice).
About half of an hour later, the fork-shaped dropship landed ontop of a large, green valley. The crew left the dropship; the Ensign lead them toward the rest of the command crew, who were standing near the face of a nearby outcropping.
"Drop your weapons, now!", the Elite ordered. Feeling exhausted from their travels and unable to fire, the crew dropped their weapons (which consited of Assault Rifles and Pistols). The Grunt sargeant and his crew walked forward and grabbed the weapons. "Here ya go, men. Take these!", the Grunt sargeant said, handing each member of his crew a pistol.
The Elite spoke to the female softly. "Yeah, he's the one.", the Ensign answered, pointing toward captain Jacob Keyes. "Dowski, you little -blam!-! I'll-"
The crew member by the name of Hikowa was interupted when one of the Elites shot her dead. Soon, the entire command crew was dead, with the exceptions of Keyes and the Ensign by the name of Dowski. "Sir, I didn't know! Honest, I didn't. They-"
An Elite quickly crouched, picked up a pistol and aimed it at Dowski's head. The Ensign gulped, turning more pale than she was already. The Elite fired, immediately killing her. Keyes was then knocked out by a couple of the blue-armored beasts, and brought aboard the Covenant dropship. As for the Grunts, they decided to join the Elites, seeing as how they had no other place to go.

  • 02.17.2007 8:40 PM PDT
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Interesting chapter, showing the brutality of the covenant. Interesting chapter, just to add a random info, the fork shaped dropships are called Spirits.

  • 02.17.2007 9:27 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Wow. Interesting. Good job!

  • 02.18.2007 9:51 AM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Nice one!! Fine chapter!!......I hope the MC will rid these little vermine.

  • 02.19.2007 12:45 PM PDT

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nice chapter keep up the good work.

  • 02.19.2007 2:35 PM PDT

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I see you read the novels. Nice chapter. Funny Moshpit.

  • 02.19.2007 8:41 PM PDT
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lol...Nice....Keep it up.

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Thanks again, guys. The next chapter will of course arrive on Saturday. In this week's chapter, the Grunts will be provided with a lift onto the Truth and Reconciliation.

[Edited on 2/22/2007]

  • 02.22.2007 8:35 PM PDT
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Great Chapter Rare!

  • 02.23.2007 9:01 PM PDT
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Chapter 11: A Suite Fo' Six

While accompanied with a new member, the Grunt squad (while aboard a Covenant dropship) said goodbye to the grassy hills of Halo; after nearly hours of cruising, the dropship finally reached it's destination: a Covenant cruiser known as The Truth and Reconciliation.
The U-shaped cruiser slowly drifted through a large, shield-less window, and into the deck of the cruiser. The sides of the dropship lifted upward, revealing the Covenant soldiers inside.
The six Grunts hopped outside of the dropship, stretched their arms out a bit, and took notice of their surroundings. Shades of blue and purple covered the walls of the ship.
"A bit dull, if you ask me.", said Hackle.
"No kiddin'. These guys don't have much taste when it comes to decoratin'.", Pillow replied. The two Grunts continued the conversation for almost a minute more until it was broken by their sargeant.
"Enough, you two! We didn't come here to talk about interior decorating!", the red-armored Grunt exclaimed.
"Yeah, about that, why did we come here anyway?", Silco asked.
"For safety, that's why. I mean, we were sittin' ducks back there. If it weren't for Pillow bein' so curious, that giant fella in the green armor would've mopped the floor with us. This place is filled with Sangheili. I even hired a body guard guard during our trip over here.", the sargeant answered.
"How were you able to hire a body guard?! You don't have any money.", Fisca pointed out.
"Didn't have ta pay 'im. The guy said he'd do it for free. I just hope he's reliable as that gold-armored fella we met on the alien cruiser. Now he was committed!", the Grunt sargeant answered.
After much conversation, the six Grunts were lead to one of the most confortable chambers in the entire cruiser (which was acquired mostly out of bribery). Though it still provided the same, purple-colored design, the chamber also contained two leather couches, a plasma-powered fireplace, and an enormous window behind all of that. The view beyond the window was truly a beautiful sight to behold-particularly at night. All of this made made the place feel more like an apartment or hotel than an actual cruiser. After settling in, the Grunts fell sound asleep for what was quite possibly the last peaceful night of their lives.

[Edited on 2/24/2007]

  • 02.24.2007 6:32 PM PDT
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Another good chapter Rare!

  • 02.24.2007 8:58 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

That was awesome!

  • 02.25.2007 9:19 AM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

And then...boom they all die becasue the MC raids the place.

[Edited on 2/25/2007]

  • 02.25.2007 4:44 PM PDT