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Subject: Halo: Unggoy Evolved (Fan-Fic)

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

Let the Chief escape and crush everyone!!

  • 03.17.2007 9:09 PM PDT
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I wonder who the golden-armored elite could be? Great chapter Rare! Keep it up!

  • 03.18.2007 2:06 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

That was awesome Rare!

  • 03.19.2007 3:37 PM PDT

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Truth and Reconciliation , Halo Infinities , Council of the Rising

Nice one! I don't think I heard about a Legate in the real Halo. And isn't another key thing to begin the "Great Journey" the index?

  • 03.19.2007 7:39 PM PDT
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Thanks again for the pieces of feedback, everyone. Also, incase something goes wrong during this week's site "upgrade", there will of course be a new topic started for this fan-fic.

  • 03.19.2007 11:08 PM PDT

Sorry for the double-post, people, but i've just created another account, though I only plan to use the one I am posting in now. This account was created in order to link my XBL gamertag with my profile here, since my Xbox.com login-in was different from that of my old Bungie.net account. So if you want to contact me, PM this account.

[Edited on 03.21.2007 6:56 PM PDT]

  • 03.20.2007 5:05 PM PDT
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YES! new capter tommorow!!!

  • 03.23.2007 8:41 PM PDT

Chapter 15: Prison Break

The Grunts stood at the edge of the dark platform, as their Elite comrade-'Latume- prepared the Phantom.
"So, how'll we know we found the Legate?", the Grunt sargeant asked.
"The Legate's physical structure is much similar to that of my own.", answered Truth.
"Oh, so you're sayin' he's a Prophet?"
"Not quite, Unggoy. You see, the Legate has not been to High Charity in many years. However, he is technically a Hierarch. His job is to maintain and study the animals onboard the Infinite Succor."
"Alright. Anythin' else we need ter know?"
"Ah, yes. The Legate is usually conducting his studies at the front of the ship, which may save you from getting lost in your search."
The Grunt sargeant nodded, as he and his five soldiers walked into the Phantom's gravlift, then into the ship itself. The dropship began to hover, then zoomed out of the cruiser and into the night.
As the Prophet of Truth walked back to his quarters, a pair of automatic doors pealed open, with an Elite rushing towards him. "Excellency, the demon has escaped!", the Elite said.
"Argh!", Truth exclaimed, "We must leave this cruiser immeadietly, then. We shall evacuate in this dropship."
"But what of my men, along with everyone else on the cruiser?", the silver-clad Elite asked.
"There job is, of course, to eliminate the demon, while we return to High Charity."
The Elite looked backward, hearing the screams and cries of his men, and came to his decision.
"Excellency, I believe I am needed elsewhere.", the Sangheili said.
The Prophet knew exactly what he meant and replied, "Very well, 'Kasovia. My prayers will be with you.". With that, the cowardly Hierarch entered one of the U-shaped dropships to his right and left the Truth and Reconciliation. 'Kasovia watched the dropship as it too faded into the distance. When that was all over and done with, the silver-clad Elite summoned as much courage as he could, and headed back into the ship's main corridors.
The Master Chief-as well Keyes and his men-continued their fight in the hallway, pumping countless bursts of lead into their opponents. As a small, veteran Grunt limped forward, the Chief added an extra clip into his assault weapon and fired, putting the creature of his misery.
"Hey, you want some more?", a marine shouted, as he tossed a frag grenade into the group, sending the remaining Covenant troops to their death. The marine moved forward, shooting a corpse with his pistol. "Stand up so I can kill you again!"
"Captain, this way!", the Chief exclaimed as he pointed at a set of automatic doors at the end of the hallway. Keyes nodded, and just as the doors opened, there was 'Kasovia. The Sangheili stared at him with sharp, hellish eyes, and just as he took out his Energy Sword, the Chief switched to his shotgun, ending 'Kasovia's threat with a single shell.

  • 03.24.2007 6:28 PM PDT
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Great chapter! You make the Chief seem so brutal lol! Keep it up!

  • 03.24.2007 8:30 PM PDT
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Poor covenant weenies....oh well, the less the better...

  • 03.24.2007 8:46 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

Lol Nice!

  • 03.25.2007 10:15 AM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

to quote Borat: "Very Nice!!"

  • 03.25.2007 3:52 PM PDT
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So I was wrong....

KEEP IT UP!!!

  • 03.25.2007 7:38 PM PDT

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Truth and Reconciliation , Halo Infinities , Council of the Rising

Same here!

  • 03.26.2007 7:57 PM PDT

Thanks again for the feedback, everyone. In this week's chapter, 'Latume and the Grunts will begin their search for the Legate, on the Infinite Succor.

  • 03.27.2007 6:04 PM PDT
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Oh, son of a fridgin' biscuiteater, this is gonna be good!

  • 03.27.2007 7:01 PM PDT
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Another cool chapter made, keep it up.

  • 03.31.2007 11:37 AM PDT

Chapter 16: Look What We Found!

The Phantom slowly entered one of the Infinite Succor's main entrances. Once they were in, the Phantom stopped in mid-air; a tall stream of purple poured out of the dropship, and the seven Covenant soldiers descended to the ship's metal flooring. A number of doors-similar to those of the Truth and Reconciliation-surrounded the chamber, leading into different sections of the cruiser; in the right-hand corner of the room stood a large piece of equipment, with at least four funnel-like contraptions attached to it.
"Not as pretty as I expected- a little too chrome for my tastes.", said Pillow.
"Ah, not this again!", the Grunt sargeant whined.
Suddenly, a loud screech came from outside, with one of the fork-shaped dropships heading their way. A small, red alarm on the ceiling flashed, with a low, robotic voice saying, "This section of the ship has already been boarded. You are not permitted to enter."
"Out of the way!", 'Latume shouted, as he and the six Grunts moved to the room's right hand corner- just next to the yellow-coated piece of machinery. The dropship quickly moved in, crushing the Phantom as it hit the ground. Both of the dropships burst into flames, and without hesitation, the Grunt sargeant-along with three of his men- grabbed onto the funnel-shaped objects next to them and pulled the triggers, releasing a white agent. After nearly five minutes, the fire was extinguished almost completely, leaving only a few harmless embers within the rubble.
"I'll go look for the bodies.", Hackle said.
"Good idea. We'll go look for an entrance we can use.", the Grunt sargeant said, as the rest of the room headed towards a set of auto-doors at the other end of the chamber. Meanwhile, Hackle aproached the losely-damaged door of the U-shaped dropship, knocking it down with his left foot. As he entered the small, narrow passage, a small trickle of yellow-green liquid dripped onto his methane-breather. The Grunt the drop on his finger and examined it closely. As he had stopped moving, though, he soon heard a pair of slow-moving footsteps behind him. Hackle waited a second or two, and once he looked backward, a pale, Elite-sized creature stood before him with long, sharp tentacles expanding from nearly every one of its fingers.
"What the-"
The six troops outside soon heard a loud scream coming from the inside of the dropship. As each of them turned backward, the same pale creatures began to pour out of the ship's two carriage-compartments. "What in the world?", the Grunt sargeant said under his breath, as nearly every one of the beasts limped toward them. "Quickly, Unggoy- this way! We must find the Legate!", 'Latume exclaimed. The five Grunts nodded, following the Elite through the door ahead, though the Grunt sargeant looked backward for a few mere seconds; he knew what became of Hackle.

[Edited on 03.31.2007 8:01 PM PDT]

  • 03.31.2007 7:50 PM PDT

No soldier should be honored for doing what is expected
of him. He is after all, just doing his job.

Posted by: the green grunt
(|__/) This....This is bunny
(x..X) Keslo Killed it
('') ('') what a nice guy

lol, it will be funny if Hackle appears on top of a pile of dead flood.

  • 04.01.2007 7:47 PM PDT

Posted by: DeeJ
Why don't you just give me ONE SECOND!

lol Nice!

  • 04.02.2007 2:29 PM PDT

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Truth and Reconciliation , Halo Infinities , Council of the Rising

What Hackle's a...Flood! NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Great chapter.

  • 04.02.2007 8:13 PM PDT
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cool chapter, keep them coming

  • 04.02.2007 9:57 PM PDT
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lol. That is a good surprise for the grunts. damn good chapter Rare.

  • 04.03.2007 3:42 PM PDT

"Men cry not for themselves, but their comrades."

"A hero need not speak. When he is gone, the world will speak for him."

Awesome chapter Rare! Keep it up!

  • 04.03.2007 5:46 PM PDT