- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Ya, I know your focus is on the story, and persoanly you are a great writer. When I make amchinimas I try to incorperate the story with alot of chaos and action. From what I am currently doing I'm trying to show the suffering of man, getting totaly massacured and some of my main characters suffer from horrible betrayal and death.
You don't have to but I would like if anyone would read this, it's not that great but I would like some feedback. I'm only on the fith episode the the story is JUST beggining to show it's colors, so don't tell me:
"Your story sucks"
Because currently it's barley started. Feedback please.
P.S. This is copy righted, so don't even think of stealing it. I dought anyone would, but you can't be to careful.