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Subject: NEW EPISODES!
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First off I just want to say thanks for you checking out this forum. This is a side-story I did a year ago. It's about a Group of Spartans called the L.O.S
The Prolouge is that a covenant bomb has been activated on Earth and Spartan Izzy has broken into a "secret" covenant base they ran into. Izzy has gotten the key Card and codes needed to deactivate it.


EPISODE 1
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/halo_logo.jpg
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/comichalobook.j pg

EPISODE 2
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/halo_logo2.jpg
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/episode2halo.jp g
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/haloc omicsecond
part.jpg


EPISODE 3
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/halo_logo3.jpg
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/comicepisode3.j pg
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/untitled.jpg

EPISODE 4 (NEW!)
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/halo_logo4.jpg



It's not over yet though. I've got a few more already made so check back.
Fell free to leave comments and if you have any ideas you can post them.
Thanks


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  • 12.30.2006 7:30 PM PDT
Subject: check this side-story out.
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Posted by: RileJarom
First off I just want to say thanks for you checking out this forum. This is the first two episodes of a side-story I did a year ago. It's about a Group of Spartans called the L.O.D
The Prolouge is that a covenant bomb has been activated on Earth and Spartan Izzy has broken into a "secret" covenant base they ran into. Izzy has gotten the key Card and codes needed to deactivate it. Radio's beyond the radius of the battlefeild is jammed and so begins the story.
(you'll have to click the link and maybe upsize the pics if it shows up small)

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/halo_logo.jpg

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/comichalobook.j pg

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/halo_logo2.jpg

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/episode2halo.jp g

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i97/jarom01/halocomicsecond part.jpg


It's not over yet though. I've got a few more already made so check back.
Fell free to leave comments and if you have any ideas you can post them.
Thanks
(Also... if you would like to be a character say so. I'll kindly give you a part.)



Lazy. Most regulars around The Maw (or most forums, for that matter) won't bother looking at something unless it's linked for convenience.

And cause I know some smartass is prolly going to say "well, I would've copy-and-pasted it anyways," ...no. Just...no. You're wrong.

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Now for a bit of constructive criticism: The comics...need a bit of work, to be honest. Try refining the plot more. It's a solid plot, but sort of run-of-the-mill and...yeah. I would also...well...honestly, Halo isn't the best game to make a webcomic out of. The discontinuity in the environments and backgrounds the characters are in are just a tad on the confusing side. Try using all shots from a certain map or even some self-made screenshots if possible, for continuity's sake. Keep trying and you will get it right eventually, though.

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  • 12.30.2006 7:53 PM PDT
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There's 2 topic in the maw, and 1 in the library. That's illegal.

  • 12.30.2006 7:54 PM PDT
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Posted by: Anton P Nym
who says you have to be an ace to have fun?

Posted by: TUI_Obi_Wan
Stupid parents let their stupid children play games that are rated M when they should be playing Big Birds Spelling Adventures

Posted by: Kira Onime
Also the AR is actually good in CQB now and no longer a glorified baseball bat.

Posted by: Marines
There's 2 topic in the maw, and 1 in the library. That's illegal.


Ok, Mr. Modzorator.

  • 12.30.2006 8:01 PM PDT
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Yes, please, read the stickies before you post.

And by the way me15er, I wouldn't have copied-and-pasted it in the first place. :)

  • 12.30.2006 8:06 PM PDT
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Maw

I half expected a loading screen before the opening graphic.

  • 12.30.2006 8:16 PM PDT
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This comic needs work.

  • 12.30.2006 9:40 PM PDT
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My eyes didn't even blink, meaning to me that those comics had no reaction on a live brain.

  • 12.31.2006 9:38 AM PDT
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Yes, I know it "sucks" maybe I'd rate it a 5 but It was my first time and It is a little sketchy but I'm releasing another episode. I know it's illegal if it's the same thing. I had some trouble and I wasn't trying to do anything wrng and to let you guys know, i'm closing the other one. Thanks for the critisizm but just remember... my first ones we're without help and well now I present them again with part 3.



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  • 12.31.2006 10:07 AM PDT
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Oh, the plot is not what your expecting it to be. There is a twist and no it doesn't involve the flood because thats's old. Just read episode 3.

  • 12.31.2006 10:22 AM PDT

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I'm there but, man this is really starting to sound like communism.
Long live the MAW.

try to make the text box's of people saying something transparent. overwise it's a blob of white covering 50% of the comic....

  • 12.31.2006 10:46 AM PDT
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Hey Guys How about Give Newcomers a Break, God!!

A New guy Posts and you just jump on him and start Beating his A--, Telling him all the Rules (When half of you don't obey them yourselves) and Crapping on his Work for NOTHING!!!

It's the Guys First Comics for crying Out Loud!!! I'd Like to see you guys put forth enough Creative Mind Power and write your own Comics!

Sure the Comics Need Working on I don't disagree about that but don't Landblast the Guy about it!

Also I Don't Mean to get Pissed and Act Like an A-- Myself, but I Just Happen to be a New Member and Have been Blasted on my posts many times as well, so come on guys and give us some good Halo Style Encouragement, don't just talk down our Work!

BOSS

  • 12.31.2006 8:16 PM PDT
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Posted by: BOSS RC1138
Hey Guys How about Give Newcomers a Break, God!!

A New guy Posts and you just jump on him and start Beating his A--, Telling him all the Rules (When half of you don't obey them yourselves) and Crapping on his Work for NOTHING!!!

It's the Guys First Comics for crying Out Loud!!! I'd Like to see you guys put forth enough Creative Mind Power and write your own Comics!

Sure the Comics Need Working on I don't disagree about that but don't Landblast the Guy about it!

Also I Don't Mean to get Pissed and Act Like an A-- Myself, but I Just Happen to be a New Member and Have been Blasted on my posts many times as well, so come on guys and give us some good Halo Style Encouragement, don't just talk down our Work!

BOSS

Calm the hell down. Most of us were just giving him constructive criticism. I could make much better comics, I think. At least I wouldn't just take some pictures online and add text to them and call it a comic. And Why Do You Capitalize The First Letter Of Every Word? :)

  • 12.31.2006 8:28 PM PDT
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Look Sorry , Okay

I didn't really mean to get so upset and I Appologize, I just get so pissed when I feel like some new guy is getting beat over the head, I've been done that way so many times before but not by you guys, again I'm sorry! I don't know why I capitalize a buncha' letters, I'll remember to try not to do that.

Thanks for the admonishment, BOSS

P.S. Just Disregard the other Message, thanks

  • 12.31.2006 8:41 PM PDT
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Oh, it's fine, we do tend to be harsh asses at times, but hey, we gotta be us. :)

  • 12.31.2006 9:13 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Side-Story (READ THIS!)
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I know the firsts had shot off the internet but I've got some from halo multiplyer and Halo CE so dont fret. Keep a check on this saga. I'm adding episode 4.

  • 12.31.2006 9:18 PM PDT